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Great Unexpectations Chapter 7
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Bette shot her a scolding look and stepped aside to reveal Angie playing on the floor with her toys. "Oh, sorry", Alice whispered. And then in a louder tone, "I said ‘fudge’ sweetie. ‘Fudge’."
Angie looked up from her toys and warbled, "fug", smiling brightly.
"Nice, Al."
"Oh please, like she wasn’t gonna pick it up from you or Tina anyway."
Having no defense for this inevitable truism, Bette could only grin. "So, where were we?", asked Alice.
"Um, you were leaving", Bette said as she tried to usher Alice to the door.
"You wish", Alice grinned. "What ‘things’ do you have to work out? Oh my god. Are you still with Jodi? Is that it? Was this just some kind of lost weekend for you and Tina?"
That stung. Being reminded of her ability to fail on such a huge scale was not something that Bette dealt with kindly. "Ok Al, that’s enough! At first it was cute, but now you’re just pissing me off! You’d better leave."
Alice, startled by Bette’s anger, headed meekly for the door. "I’m sorry, Bette. I was just trying to help."
As Alice was halfway out the door, Bette called out apologetically. "Alice. Wait. Don’t go." Alice stopped and turned, looking about as pitiful as a five year old who just lost her puppy. "Come here, Al. I’m sorry." She hugged Alice. "I know you’re trying to help. And I appreciate it. I do. You know I love you, but sometimes…sometimes I could just throttle you."
Alice, still embraced by Bette, nodded while holding back her tears. "I get that alot."
They both laughed, washing off the unpleasantness. "Want some coffee, Al?", Bette asked as Alice sat down on the sofa. Alice turned down the offer, feeling naturally buzzed by this exciting development on the Kennard-Porter horizon. "So, what did you want anyway? Why were you calling?" Bette asked as she began to pick up some of the toys that Angie deemed no longer necessary. "Nothing much, just to talk, but you had me worried when you didn’t pick up for two days. That’s not like you and oh my God what is that!!?", she shrieked.
"What’s what?", Bette said standing up and looking around.
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I’d better be first ’cause I LOVED that chapter :D “This too” :) I love your story.. Tina and Bette reunited :’D Your wonderful writing makes it difficult to not enjoy :) Well done, post soon :)
I’m well impressed, red. You keep topping yourself. Excellent. More soon, please!
Oh, heck. This page has refreshed, and that last comment came out 31 flavors of wrong, either side of the pond. I meant excelling yourself, or something like. You know what I meant though, right, red? Ack, this is what I get for staying up this late on a weeknight. Still tho, post soon!
Another great chappie Red, thanks for updating. And JP, your comment made sense although with you falling all over to clarify your intended meaning the image of “topping yourself” took on a whole new light!! LOL. Don’t worry, all the kids are doing it these days!! *wink*
you were fine the first time jp. laughing my ass off!! thanks for the words though.
So Tina’s handiwork was more extensive than we thought. I did notice the word, redhorse, but truth be told page 3 of chapter 6 went into my archives file because of the scorching-hot Tibette sex scene. Tina and Bette aren’t the only ones basking in the afterglow in chapter 7. I do wonder if Alice can zip it for three whole days; that seems a tad ambitious. And I hate to say it, jp, but the double entendre occurred to me only after I read your clarification. But then I can be pretty slow on the uptake.
great update..i was too surprised that alice would wait, but will she really? thanks for keeping tibette together
Great chapter! PPS!!
Another wonderful chapter made even better with the return of the Sharpie! Much more than ‘mildly amusing’… love your writing especially the playful B & T.
Red you are soooo good! It was hilarious when Alice found the writing on Bette’s back side that Bette didn’t even know about! If anyone is watching me they probably think I’m crazy because I’m sitting here giggling to myself with the thought of that scene playing over and over in my mind. The look on Bette’s face is classic. This was so much more than “mildly amusing!” Thank you Red for the happy days! More please!
Thanks for the lovely story and excellent update. More please.
loved the dialogue…excellent update.
LMFAO@This too! XD Wow, so Alice is giving them 3 days. Is that 3 days in real people time or 3 days in Alice time, which is about the same as 10 seconds?
You just gotta love this. Cracking up at Tina marking her territory, you go girl. 3-days, wow, I don’t know how Alice is gonna do it. Bette love tina, now she just needs to learn a bit of trust.
Wonderful!
oh what a happy chapter…even Alice isn’t gonna blow it for them…u have to post soon…
Red….You’re smooth. Your writing is smooth, freakin’ funny and realistic dialogue w/all the characters. You do have a way w/words, so natural. You must be very clever and comedic in person. PPS. I can’t wait.
I started this story last night but thunder and lightening forced me turn off the computer. I was bummed by that because I was really getting into the chapter. I have always loved the banter between Bette and Tina. That is something that the show has missed out on. I can’t wait for the next chapter. Oh, I do love the body art that Tina put on Bette.