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Hidden Secrets pt 2
"you okay" he asked concern in his voice as he lifted his hand to her back
"no.. god why does everyone have to push.." she used the back of her sleeve to wipe of her face before slightly tilting her head to look at him
"i don’t know but i do know they care about you Shane….. they just want to know whats going on with you"
"i know they do but god… why why do they huh i mean look at me" she stood up instantly " why the fuck should anyone care about me"
"because you are a smart, funny, beautiful and most of all you have a big heart, i can see it every time we talk even though you try to hide it.. you care about your friends so much that you would sell every bit of your own sanity to help them… so much so that its killing you inside and don’t try to denie it, remember i saw everything from the crying to the nightmares and the sleepless nights… you give everyone you meet so much even if your just listening to what they have to say but Shane when are you gonna stop fighting this this thing in you and let us help you" He said ‘us’ motioning to the silent group behind them.
Shane slowly turned around to find her friends all staring at her with concern across their faces "oh fuck Mark" she turned to him asking silently ‘why’ and he only nodded a silent ‘its time’
"fine" she turned back to the group "OK before you start with the questions your gonna watch something got it"
They all nodded
"OK mark I’m with you lets go" she said lowering her head and walking silently past the group of friends and got in marks car. The group just looked at Mark as he walked by them and got in his car with shane and began the ride home..
"OK…. what just happened" Alice asked with a confused look on her face
"i think.. Shane just agreed to talk to us" Carmen said a hint of shock in her voice.
"ya.. um guys we should probably get going Shane and Mark are already gone" Bette stated bringing the women out of shock and into the realization that they where standing near the edge of a cliff for no reason
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shane feels so real.you did a really good job with the interviews. mark and shane were very much in character. and it was fantastic.do continue. please.
Finally! The Shane I’ve been waiting for. You put this together very nicely. You say TBC I say MBC…must be continued lol. Please?I love the way the emotions are ‘in the air’ so to speak. I don’t have to ‘read to feel’. This is very good.
Oh my God… WOW! That was amazing! Really good job! I loved it! Please please please continue soon!! ;-)
AMAZING!!!!
i feel so sorry for shane, i love it do continue… Love the whay Shane talks about Carmen well actully not talk but you knoow what i mean
Baby, this story fuckin’ kicks Tina’s ass . . . ~stutters~ I mean ass (sorry don’t like Tina that much, go figure, WoOt ;-p) Dude, you authors with your freakin’ cliffhangers . . . damn it . . . I want more like now . . . LIKE NOW!!! LMFAO!!!! But anyways, please post soon, I donna’ if I can take this suspense much longer ~wink/smirk~ So . . . yeah . . . Keep up the great fuckin’ work and post like now for me . . . Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!
this is a very cool story. hope you will continue to post.
truly great story. Very good job. Shane is such a nice and lovable person. Continue, please.
Dude!!! Seriously this story f***ing rocks my socks off. Please update soon!!!! I have to know what happens