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Hidden Secrets pt 2
"oh come on lets go" Dana said as she took off in a sprint to her car fallowed by everyone else
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15 minutes later everyone had arrived back at the house. They all made them selves comfortable while Shane and Mark where in his studio collecting the tapes of footage she had given back to mark…
"what do you think she wants us to watch guys" jenny asked
"Gone with the Wind, how the hell would we know" Alice joked
"AL shut up" Shane said as she walked into the room carrying several taped and fallowed by mark with his camera
"whats the camera for mark" Bette asked
"to play the tapes"
"what is it we are gonna watch Shane" Tina asked
Shane sighed and ran her hands through her hair "my life" was all she said as she handed mark the first tape
"you sure you want them watching these Shane" mark asked as he hooked the cords into the TV
"yes they wanted to know what Ive been up to lately then they are gonna see it first hand" she turned to face her friends "OK rule one just watch, two no talking, ill answer any questions after got it"
They all just nodded "and if you see me walk out of the room for a minute or so don’t try and stop me Ive watched every second of these tapes… i know what I’m showing you." she said as she turned to mark "ready"
"yep" he hit play
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Every ones eyes went to the TV as the footage of Shane and Carmen playing around in the kitchen. Shane’s laughing because she split beer on Carmen and Carmen retaliates by throwing beer on Shane. Then jenny comes in….
Next scene is of Shane and the flower girl but what surprised everyone is that Shane puts the breaks on and said sorry and asked the girl politely to leave.. moments later she turns the music on extremely loud, and starts pacing, then out of nowhere she chunks the vase across the room.. before storming out of the house.
Followed by that night when Shane brings the supposed twins home and interrupts Jen and Carmen in the kitchen.. cut to Shane’s room the twins are trying to get Shane into bed but Shane refuses and sits in the corner getting high .. after showing the girls out she walks into her room slamming the door shut and punches a hole in the wall. and Mark zooms in on her face its contoured in pain and tears escape her eyes…
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shane feels so real.you did a really good job with the interviews. mark and shane were very much in character. and it was fantastic.do continue. please.
Finally! The Shane I’ve been waiting for. You put this together very nicely. You say TBC I say MBC…must be continued lol. Please?I love the way the emotions are ‘in the air’ so to speak. I don’t have to ‘read to feel’. This is very good.
Oh my God… WOW! That was amazing! Really good job! I loved it! Please please please continue soon!! ;-)
AMAZING!!!!
i feel so sorry for shane, i love it do continue… Love the whay Shane talks about Carmen well actully not talk but you knoow what i mean
Baby, this story fuckin’ kicks Tina’s ass . . . ~stutters~ I mean ass (sorry don’t like Tina that much, go figure, WoOt ;-p) Dude, you authors with your freakin’ cliffhangers . . . damn it . . . I want more like now . . . LIKE NOW!!! LMFAO!!!! But anyways, please post soon, I donna’ if I can take this suspense much longer ~wink/smirk~ So . . . yeah . . . Keep up the great fuckin’ work and post like now for me . . . Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!
this is a very cool story. hope you will continue to post.
truly great story. Very good job. Shane is such a nice and lovable person. Continue, please.
Dude!!! Seriously this story f***ing rocks my socks off. Please update soon!!!! I have to know what happens