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    Hidden Secrets pt 4

    "you don’t have to do this.." Shane mumbled sleepily against her pillow

    "but i want too.." her words coming out almost a whisper as if trying not to ruin what ever this light exchange between her and Shane was.. she watched as Shane rolled over and looked up to find Shane staring into her eyes.. her eyes, that emerald green shining with something Carmen had never seen before, the intensity of the gaze nearly caused Carmen to shutter and she averted her eyes in another direction….

    Shane had rolled over to steal quick look at Carmen but was caught off guard when Carmen looked up at her… she could have sworn those beautiful brown orbs were pulling her in but the connection was broken when Carmen turned away and began putting her shoes away….

    So now while Carmen was literally trying to keep herself busy, Shane began to drift of back to sleep deciding it was better not to try and fix everything now, she rolled onto her side trying to get comfortable… and it wasn’t as easy as she thought and continued to roll around on the bed trying to find the right spot..

    Carmen halted her movements of putting things away when she heard movement on the bed, she turned around to find shane fidgeting around on the bed and after a few seconds of watching the stubborn tomboy roll around she asked "what are you doing"

    Shane was brought out of her frustration and saw Carmen smiling at her with an amused look on her face"trying to get comfortable" she stated matter-of-factly causing Carmen to laugh lightly and walk over to the bed

    "here sit up" she ordered " it might be easier to sleep if your not in a suit jacket, tie, and button up shirt wouldn’t you think" she asked arching her eyebrow and pulled lightly on Shane’s tie..

    Shane chuckled lightly at herself, she felt stupid now it must of looked kind of funny trying to sleep wearing all these cloths.. "ya i guess" she said as she slowly pulled her jacket off and started to unbutton her shirt, only to have Carmen take over and then put the cloths on the chair in the corner..

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    1. just sleeping together is such a fantastic thing to do. that was a really sweet chapter. just the right amount and not too much sap. i love that shane is still an action speaks louder than words person.. with the peck on the lips and all. love it when you update:D

    2. I’m loving this story. I promise to post a more constructive comment soon, but for now an editor would help the grammar flow better. Other than that, you write Shane beautifully. I can actually see this happening and it has a very good touch of realism to it. PPS.

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