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Hidden Secrets Pt.6
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"nothing here Dr. Peterson" one of the men stated as he stepped into the hallway fallowed by the other..
"Thank you James and Marshell" the doctor then turned back towards Shane who had begun placing her room back in order.."Shane i need you to take this" she said holding out two small pills
"what is it" Shane asked as she took the pills from the doctor
"its a muscle relaxer.. your going to become very edgy after treatment starts and these will help with the tremors and shaking caused by withdraw" she explained as she watched Shane down the pills with a full bottle of water ……
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When night fell upon the city, the entire gang minus Shane had all arrived at Bette and Tina’s house… The night began with Bette and Tina telling everyone about their final doctor visit before the baby’s due date and how they decided, with the doctors insistence, to forgo the home birth and have the baby in a hospital for safety purposes… followed by jenny’s news about her book being signed and that mark was in the process of moving out….. Mark was open about his documentary and his plans to travel…
Mark’s presence at the family night was surprisingly different then usual.. it seemed everyone had become comfortable around him and a little more understanding of his friendship with Shane and decided to forgive and forget his mistakes… they looked up at him in a way.. thankful he had been there for Shane when she needed someone.. after yesterday they could all honestly see why Shane had taken to him so easily and when he spoke to them, it was no longer in a fact finding mission kind of way like when he had first moved in… almost as if he’d grown into a man, no longer the creepy little boy they caught filming their every move….
The conversation continued with Dana and Alice talking about their plans to vacation in Paris, after Dana’s next tournament.. Alice was so excited, the girls could have sworn her head was going to pop off… they all shared a laugh when she started jumping up and down like a 4 year old, who had just seen Santa clause…
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fordt time commenting on this one i think, and all i can say is amazing, capture everyone perfectly especialy the love story of shane and carmen , you write amazingly keep it up this story is soooooo good i love it especially shane and her new her its gonna be good the date and the relationship especially now she can be herself and love i cant wait you are amazing did i already say that….:)
keep on with this thanks
This is fuckin’ awesome, Baby-girl!!! I want more like now . . . Like always from me, Baby, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!!
This was very sweet. Good ol’ Shane, in rehab; Trying to cut her addiction to sex…er I mean…drugs. LOL. Very nice and believable in terms of the characters and their attitudes. You weave your words well. Now a good grammar editor, and it’d be a slice of perfection. Kepp writing, you’re one of my fave-rave authors! [br]Looking forward to Shane and Carmen’s date. As for Bette and Tina’s bundle o’ joy…I’ve seen it too many times. The only thing that’ll draw my attention :hint hint: is Tina spewing at the mouth with a page of expletives for Bette. I don’t know, that just cracks me up. I think it’s the contextual irony. Anyway, don’t hesitate to write the scene if yo already plan to do so. But I’m gonna keep my eye out for the Sharmen date.
Hi, I really like this story, love Shane and Carmen together, please post soon!
dude!! not bad at all… infact better thn alota stories that are on here. do continue
Okay, I just read all the chapters for the first time, and I must say that I like the story so far. Honestly, I think the storyline has been getting progressively better and easier to get into. And I aammm getting into it. I mean, I was shocked when those brutes ransacked Shane’s room. I completely understand the need for searches, but did they have to be so beastly about it? Goodness, some people just don’t believe in manners anymore. At least now Shane gets to look forward to her date with Carmen after her week at the clinic is over. It could be her reward for enduring the trials of detox. Nice job on the story. Yay, Sharmen!