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Hidden Secrets Pt.6
Carmen filled everyone in on how she was being evicted and lost her job… but she didn’t feel the need to tell them about her wonderful night with Shane… but jenny did and Alice went ballistic again… the interrogation started immediately… and Alice’s persistence was slowly causing Carmen to break her silence.. she didn’t know where her and Shane stood and she only had Shane’s admission of love, great sex, and a possible date 7 days away to go on….
After hearing Carmen’s predicament, Jenny got an idea on how to help but felt it best if she talked with Shane first… but by the look on Carmen’s face this morning, she knew Shane would agree with her plan…
And finally after dinner and a little more talking (mostly about their absent friend, Shane) they sat down in the living room, around the new conference phone Bette borrowed from work to call Shane before it was to late… After three rings a computer automated voice came over the phone
"Thank you for calling WH Rehabilitation Clinic, please enter the 5 digit room number of the doctor or patient you are calling" Mark quickly entered the code the young doctor had given him… and sat back down waiting for Shane to answer… he grinned thinking about the dark haired, fit doctor who he happened to be taking to dinner on Friday…
"hello?" came Shane’s voice over the intercom… she was exhausted.. her voice was shaky and deeper then normal… she had just completed her first treatment about 15 minutes earlier…..
"hey Shane" the entire group said almost in unison, causing everyone in the room to chuckle including Shane
"hey everyone" she said still trying to calm her nerves and sound normal… only Mark and Carmen could tell the difference and they shared a knowing glance, realizing no one else could tell…
"how you feeling Shane" Bette asked.. Shane had always been like a daughter to her… and her closest friend.. they made an odd pair but Shane was someone she could always count on… even in her darkest moments..
"I’m OK… just finished my first treatment.. god I’ve only been here a day and my skins already crawling.. oh hey mark, what happened with Dr. Peterson after you left.. i saw you staring at her ass.. dude c’mon" she chuckled into the phone… Mark turned bright red and silently cursed Shane… she was trying to change the subject off herself, if she was truly honest her body was on fire, the muscle relaxers her doctor had given her earlier weren’t helping ..
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(35 votes, average: 3.34 out of 5)
fordt time commenting on this one i think, and all i can say is amazing, capture everyone perfectly especialy the love story of shane and carmen , you write amazingly keep it up this story is soooooo good i love it especially shane and her new her its gonna be good the date and the relationship especially now she can be herself and love i cant wait you are amazing did i already say that….:)
keep on with this thanks
This is fuckin’ awesome, Baby-girl!!! I want more like now . . . Like always from me, Baby, LYLAS ;-p . . . HoLlA aT mE!!!!
This was very sweet. Good ol’ Shane, in rehab; Trying to cut her addiction to sex…er I mean…drugs. LOL. Very nice and believable in terms of the characters and their attitudes. You weave your words well. Now a good grammar editor, and it’d be a slice of perfection. Kepp writing, you’re one of my fave-rave authors! [br]Looking forward to Shane and Carmen’s date. As for Bette and Tina’s bundle o’ joy…I’ve seen it too many times. The only thing that’ll draw my attention :hint hint: is Tina spewing at the mouth with a page of expletives for Bette. I don’t know, that just cracks me up. I think it’s the contextual irony. Anyway, don’t hesitate to write the scene if yo already plan to do so. But I’m gonna keep my eye out for the Sharmen date.
Hi, I really like this story, love Shane and Carmen together, please post soon!
dude!! not bad at all… infact better thn alota stories that are on here. do continue
Okay, I just read all the chapters for the first time, and I must say that I like the story so far. Honestly, I think the storyline has been getting progressively better and easier to get into. And I aammm getting into it. I mean, I was shocked when those brutes ransacked Shane’s room. I completely understand the need for searches, but did they have to be so beastly about it? Goodness, some people just don’t believe in manners anymore. At least now Shane gets to look forward to her date with Carmen after her week at the clinic is over. It could be her reward for enduring the trials of detox. Nice job on the story. Yay, Sharmen!