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Hidden Secrets Pt 8 B
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Shane moved her arm again and began to unbutton Carmen’s shirt…. when she heard a noise at the door..
"shit.. sorry" one of the orderlies, who was sent with Shane’s medication, said as he quickly exited the room…
Carmen started laughing, while Shane buried her head in her shoulder and groaned… feeling something she’d never felt before…. sexual frustration..
"morning baby" Carmen whispered into Shane’s ear… as she continued to laugh..
"morning" Shane mumbled into her pillow before lifting her weight off of Carmen and lying on her side…
"how are you feeling" Carmen asked…. Shane cocked an eyebrow at her "OK stupid question.." she said with a chuckle and sat up in bed, buttoning up her shirt…
"are you leaving" Shane asked as Carmen moved to grab her things…
"ya.." she walked back over to Shane and sat on the side of the bed "… i should get out of here before anyone else sees me… Katie sort of snuck me in here."
"oh.. okay" Shane said not bothering to hide the disappointment in her voice… Carmen grinned from ear to ear as Shane pouted and straddled her waist…
"baby" she said as she kissed Shane tenderly.. she wondered if Shane remembered she had to move today…
"humm" Shane hummed into the kiss… before Carmen pulled away and looked into her eyes…
"i really gotta go… " she said rising off of Shane but was surprised to feel Shane hold her in place..
"why" Shane asked… not releasing her grip on Carmen’s waist…
Carmen leaned forward.. "um… i have to move in today" she whispered into Shane’s ear… before pulling back and giving Shane a knowing look..
"ya?" Shane asked… now extremely excited…. when jenny brought up the subject of Carmen moving in, Shane couldn’t say ‘yes’ fast enough… she liked the idea of having Carmen around all the time…
"yes… the whole gang is meeting me at the apartment in like 2 hours… so i really need to go" she said as Shane finally released her grip…. Carmen slowly got off the bed and grabbed her things….
"okay so … ill see you in 4 days.." Carmen said as she walk over to Shane who was now sitting on the side of her bed.. legs over the edge…
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Really like it but, I get the feeling you don’t like Jenny that much lol it’s just that when you write her name is always jenny and not Jenny and with her is the only character that you do that, I think its funny lol but really cute story
New chapter! YAY!! I’m loving this story… can’t wait to see the date. ;)
Fuckin’ awesome!!! Lovin’ it!!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p HoLlA aT mE!!!!
Wow, this seems like a completely different story than when it first began. I mean, I don’t get a sick feeling in my stomach at the thought of Mark anymore (in fact, that part where Carmen had to ask for his help because she’s too short to reach the hatch was adorable), and Shane is so much happier now, more content now that she’s cleaned up and is with Carmen. Everyone, including the gang (with regards to Mark), has certainly come a long way. I love it. I can’t wait for Sharmen’s date, and I’d love to see where you take the story from here. Great job.
Hey I love this story it’s very sweet. I really do hope you keep going with it. And you know you should bring this over to the Shane/Carmen fanfic site I know all the readers there would really love it!
Yay for this new installment ! How lovely they all are, no useless drama, sweetness and fun. Keep it up !
amazing simply amazing, what more can i say……. i love this fic and cant wait for the date , shane and carmen in love are soooo cute i love seeing them like this please keep it up and post soon
:Sniff:…Okay, before this gets any sappier, I wanna say…I’m really, really enjoying this story. Smooth flowing development…I can feel the mush-o-meter rising but I guess Shane deserves some mush in her life. Just be careful, I think it’s waaay too early for Sharmen to get ‘cute’ as in ‘fuzzy slippers’ cute, but then maybe I am just being paranoid. Keep ’em coming please!