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Hidden Secrets Pt 8 B
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"ya 4 days" Shane said more for herself then Carmen…
"bye Shane" she leaned down and placed one more kiss on Shane’s lips before turning towards the door to leave…
Shane stood up and grabbed Carmen lightly by the arm pulling her into a front to back hug and whispered "i love you" in Carmen’s ear…
Carmen smile only grew wider as she turned around and saw the a goofy smile on Shane’s face "i love you too" she said capturing Shane’s lips again…. before quickly sprinting out the door.. she knew if she didn’t leave now, she’d never leave….
As the door closer, Shane chuckled lightly at her girlfriends quick exit before walking back over to her bed and passing out….
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A few hours later, Carmen walked out of her apartment for the last time.. she couldn’t believe she was moving in with Shane and jenny.. a small smile made it way to her face as she walked over to the U-Haul, which was surrounded by her friends, parked outside the apartment complex… she placed the last box in the truck..
"is that it"Bette asked breathlessly, hunched over using the truck to hold her up…. with the elevators broken they had to walk up and down all 10 floors….
"yep… that’s it.." Carmen said as she tried reaching for the door handle to close the back… "um… mark could you" she said pointing to the door…. the string used to pull it closed was no longer there and Carmen was too short to reach the top…
"huh?"he asked looking in the direction she was pointing and then laughed "ya …. i got it" he said reaching up and pulling the door closed…
"thanks" she said with a smile…. she couldn’t believe how comfortable it had gotten between all of them..
"no problem" he turned to look at the others and couldn’t help but laugh… the women were either hunched over.. lying on the ground or leaning on the side of the truck… "you guys okay" he asked….
"I’m beat… Carmen who knew you had so much shit" Dana whined knowing they still weren’t done… " i mean i won’t need to train again for another week after that.."
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Really like it but, I get the feeling you don’t like Jenny that much lol it’s just that when you write her name is always jenny and not Jenny and with her is the only character that you do that, I think its funny lol but really cute story
New chapter! YAY!! I’m loving this story… can’t wait to see the date. ;)
Fuckin’ awesome!!! Lovin’ it!!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p HoLlA aT mE!!!!
Wow, this seems like a completely different story than when it first began. I mean, I don’t get a sick feeling in my stomach at the thought of Mark anymore (in fact, that part where Carmen had to ask for his help because she’s too short to reach the hatch was adorable), and Shane is so much happier now, more content now that she’s cleaned up and is with Carmen. Everyone, including the gang (with regards to Mark), has certainly come a long way. I love it. I can’t wait for Sharmen’s date, and I’d love to see where you take the story from here. Great job.
Hey I love this story it’s very sweet. I really do hope you keep going with it. And you know you should bring this over to the Shane/Carmen fanfic site I know all the readers there would really love it!
Yay for this new installment ! How lovely they all are, no useless drama, sweetness and fun. Keep it up !
amazing simply amazing, what more can i say……. i love this fic and cant wait for the date , shane and carmen in love are soooo cute i love seeing them like this please keep it up and post soon
:Sniff:…Okay, before this gets any sappier, I wanna say…I’m really, really enjoying this story. Smooth flowing development…I can feel the mush-o-meter rising but I guess Shane deserves some mush in her life. Just be careful, I think it’s waaay too early for Sharmen to get ‘cute’ as in ‘fuzzy slippers’ cute, but then maybe I am just being paranoid. Keep ’em coming please!