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Hidden Secrets Pt 8 B
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"ya… i mean shit girl" Alice added now spread eagle on the concrete by the truck….
"oh stop being so dramatic Alice… come on lets eat" jenny said pulling Alice up off the ground….
"OK…" Alice said slightly perking up at the sound of food…
"so Carmen how was Shane this morning" Tina asked…
"she freaked out last night when she woke up… but she seemed fine this morning… " Carmen said hoping into the moving vans driver seat… smiling at the memory of how Shane went about waking her up..
"did you… " Alice asked when she saw Carmen smile…
"no…" Carmen said quickly cutting Alice off before the question could fly out her mouth… the others stood there confused for a moment not knowing what that was about before Alice finally spoke up…
"OK OK… lets go eat, so we can finish moving" Alice said defeated… her comment causing the others to grown as they walked to their cars and fallowed Carmen to the planet….
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Shane came back to her room after her final treatment for the day and found Dr. Peterson waiting for her… Katie seemed to be avoiding her all day and Shane didn’t understand why…
"hey Katie" Shane said…
"Hi" Katie said starring at her hand..
"is everything OK" Shane asked apprehensively… taking a seat on her bed…
"ya" Katie said finally looking up.."i just wanted to say I’m sorry"
"huh? for what"Shane asked confused…
"for almost killing you with those pills.. I’m a doctor i should have checked to.." Shane immediately cut her off…
"hey.. you have nothing to be sorry about, you didn’t know that i was allergic to them, i didn’t even know, so don’t worry about it" she said trying to reassure her doctor and new friend…
"okay.. so how are you feeling" Katie asked… after all she was still Shane’s doctor, no matter if they were friends or not…
"i feel great actually.. i don’t know… it weird, after the first few treatments.. it seemed to get easier"she replied honestly…
"that just means the treatments are working… how are you sleeping" the doctor asked…
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Really like it but, I get the feeling you don’t like Jenny that much lol it’s just that when you write her name is always jenny and not Jenny and with her is the only character that you do that, I think its funny lol but really cute story
New chapter! YAY!! I’m loving this story… can’t wait to see the date. ;)
Fuckin’ awesome!!! Lovin’ it!!! Like always from me, Baby-girl, LYLAS ;-p HoLlA aT mE!!!!
Wow, this seems like a completely different story than when it first began. I mean, I don’t get a sick feeling in my stomach at the thought of Mark anymore (in fact, that part where Carmen had to ask for his help because she’s too short to reach the hatch was adorable), and Shane is so much happier now, more content now that she’s cleaned up and is with Carmen. Everyone, including the gang (with regards to Mark), has certainly come a long way. I love it. I can’t wait for Sharmen’s date, and I’d love to see where you take the story from here. Great job.
Hey I love this story it’s very sweet. I really do hope you keep going with it. And you know you should bring this over to the Shane/Carmen fanfic site I know all the readers there would really love it!
Yay for this new installment ! How lovely they all are, no useless drama, sweetness and fun. Keep it up !
amazing simply amazing, what more can i say……. i love this fic and cant wait for the date , shane and carmen in love are soooo cute i love seeing them like this please keep it up and post soon
:Sniff:…Okay, before this gets any sappier, I wanna say…I’m really, really enjoying this story. Smooth flowing development…I can feel the mush-o-meter rising but I guess Shane deserves some mush in her life. Just be careful, I think it’s waaay too early for Sharmen to get ‘cute’ as in ‘fuzzy slippers’ cute, but then maybe I am just being paranoid. Keep ’em coming please!