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Hoops & Layups – Chapter 17
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“Sure, it will”
I got up to put my glass in the sink. I couldn’t help myself, her beauty was once again pulling everything from me. I pushed her against the counter and we both started kissing. She panted.
“Man, you have a knack for starting things that we can’t finish”
“We definitely will finish this, but later”
I stood there with my mouth open while she walked out of the kitchen.
“Tina I am headed back to my place then I will see you at 1 ok? Thanks for last night” She kissed me and left.
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Once at her place, Tina grabbed the phone to call Jon.
“Hey Jon do you have any clients today?”
“No, why?”
“I want you to fly me and a guest to New Mexico, we will be stay the night but ready to go at 12pm, can you do that?”
“Yea I can”
“Cool, I will meet you at the air strip at 12? How much do I need to make the check out for?”
“1500…See you later Tina”
“Bye Jon, thanks”.
I got dressed, grabbed my purse, and walked to the grocery store.
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Bette checked her messages before jumping in the shower and putting on her team warm up suit. She dialled Maggie on the way out the door.
“Shorty, I am headed over there now , do I need to pick up anything?”
“No you don’t, but she is not good today. She ate a little, not talking, when you look in her eyes it is like she is gone”
“I will be there in 10 minutes, bye”
When I got there, Maggie was in the kitchen.
“Come, have a seat” Maggie said.
“Where is she?”
“Upstairs in the tube. Bette she had a session with Dr. Lorne yesterday”
“How did it go?”
“Not well, she did not say one word for the whole hour. She hardly says anything. I can deal with the not talking. She won’t cry. It’s as if her eyes are dead. I sent Mimo to Erica’s until Bink’s is at least talking”
“Maggie, I don’t have to be back at Tina’s until later. So that gives us a couple of hours to get Bink’s to talk to us. When she gets out of the tub, she is going to talk to us. Now give me the other half of that sandwich”
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Hey Tam!!! LMAO the first comment is lost in cyberspace. EEEK!Anyway, HOT HOT HOT!!! You write the love between these two so well. The ending now…Hmmm…that really was hard to read. I find myself being more reflective as the 4th of July comes upon us. It’s a harsh reality, but its a reality never the less. As far as your brains falling out…LMAO, nice visual, but I do think it’s time you give yourself some credit and stop putting yourself down. I admire your effort and courage to put yourself out there and be vulnerable. Every author who posts their work(s) does just that, and so please, try not to be so hard on yourself. I have seen so much progress in what you send along, and there have been many times that I have smiled because I have been able to watch that first draft grow each and every time, into something more and more amazing as you pull it together. I know I should be saying this in an email, so that it can match the same ones you send me, but I would rather post it here, and send you a one liner in the email. ROFLMAO!!!! Hugs and ttys.
Tylo, this was a fantastik chapter,,,I loved how Tina took Bette to her childhood summer home and took her to her fav place,,,,,and how they made love for the very first time, perfect!!! OMG I am so feeling the pain that Al is going thru will she make it? Oh I am the 1st to post so cool!!!
Okay so I am not the first to post,,LOL
WOOOOHOOO! Just tryin to calm my self down!Poor Al, I hope she stays strong.Other than that…let’s just say I read this chappy more than once!!!(~Wink!!!!)
Now that is pure hotness there! Thank you so much for writing this! You are the best!
Here you were showing us all this love that Bette and Tina share and then you have Alice tormented and shot in the chest. I hope that Alice makes it.
Wow that was awesome tylo! Tina finally tell Bette about her twin so hopefully she will be able to sleep a little better. Now what’s going on with Alice? I hope she’s not dead. Great post T! More please.
Thanks Tam for the emotions and feelings you share with your story. I know I’m rather absent lately… but I try to keep in touch as much as I can. Trust in your talent Tam, it’s something precious. A bientôt…
OH my GOD! I hope Alice is having a nightmare, she can’t be dead. Bette will be devistated that she was off having fun with Tina while her was being murdered. PPS so we can find out what is real and what is not.
O.M.F.G.TY! wow o cant call you a slacker now since i found out what you been doing looking for youre brains out there in Ohio*wink* im kidding you did a damn fine job lady and you should be very proud of youreself,You made the A.B.S.very proud tonite and everynite that is nice job.youre still missing what 25pages to beat MG!p.p.s. whats you cooking for dinner?????:)
Tam, That was so great!!! Very HOT!!!!!! I just hope Alice does not die. B&T are going top be so great together. They way you write is so heartfelt and loving Thank you
enjoyable right to the end….that was not nice…the end bit…pps
Damn that was hot, plase dont let Alice die!