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Hoops & Layups – Chapter 17
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We went upstairs. Bink was sitting on the bed. Maggie went in first, I was right behind her. I shut the door and turned the lock. That caused her to jump off the bed.
“Don’t lock the door” she said, her voice full of panic, her eyes wide with fear.
Maggie looked at me with unshed tears. I had the same look. Bianca picked up the poker.
“Don’t come any closer” she said.
I took a few steps towards her, and she tried to stab me. Maggie was behind her.
“Don’t come any closer, I will kill you Michael”
As I walked toward her, I had tears streaming down.
“My…” I whispered to Maggie, “we have to”.
“Then Maggie came from behind her and grabbed the poker. I continued to walk toward her.
“This is killing me” I thought “but I have to do this if it will bring you back”
We cornered her as I got so close. We were breathing the same air. She started punching me anywhere she could reach, saying “I hate you Michael”.
This went on for a few minutes. Then Maggie jumped in front of me. She looked up and called her Jonathan and started to hit her crying and punching her. Maggie just stood there and took it. When you looked in her eyes, you could see her heart shattering each time Bink’s hit her. I grabbed Bink’s from behind. She froze as I put my arms around her.
“Stop it please” I whispered, “it’s Bette and that’s not Jonathan it’s Mags and you’re killing her”
She fell to the ground sobbing, saying she was sorry and to please not leave her. Maggie held her for a while. I sat in the chair and watched them for a while. I looked at my watch. I had to meet T in one hour so I got up and left.
When I got in my car, I dialed Shorty’s number.
“Hey, the plan worked. I will call you later to see how you guys are doing, bye”
I got to my place and laidd down on the couch. I had quite a morning. I woke up to someone knocking on my door.
“Hold on I am coming” I said as I made my way to the door.
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Hey Tam!!! LMAO the first comment is lost in cyberspace. EEEK!Anyway, HOT HOT HOT!!! You write the love between these two so well. The ending now…Hmmm…that really was hard to read. I find myself being more reflective as the 4th of July comes upon us. It’s a harsh reality, but its a reality never the less. As far as your brains falling out…LMAO, nice visual, but I do think it’s time you give yourself some credit and stop putting yourself down. I admire your effort and courage to put yourself out there and be vulnerable. Every author who posts their work(s) does just that, and so please, try not to be so hard on yourself. I have seen so much progress in what you send along, and there have been many times that I have smiled because I have been able to watch that first draft grow each and every time, into something more and more amazing as you pull it together. I know I should be saying this in an email, so that it can match the same ones you send me, but I would rather post it here, and send you a one liner in the email. ROFLMAO!!!! Hugs and ttys.
Tylo, this was a fantastik chapter,,,I loved how Tina took Bette to her childhood summer home and took her to her fav place,,,,,and how they made love for the very first time, perfect!!! OMG I am so feeling the pain that Al is going thru will she make it? Oh I am the 1st to post so cool!!!
Okay so I am not the first to post,,LOL
WOOOOHOOO! Just tryin to calm my self down!Poor Al, I hope she stays strong.Other than that…let’s just say I read this chappy more than once!!!(~Wink!!!!)
Now that is pure hotness there! Thank you so much for writing this! You are the best!
Here you were showing us all this love that Bette and Tina share and then you have Alice tormented and shot in the chest. I hope that Alice makes it.
Wow that was awesome tylo! Tina finally tell Bette about her twin so hopefully she will be able to sleep a little better. Now what’s going on with Alice? I hope she’s not dead. Great post T! More please.
Thanks Tam for the emotions and feelings you share with your story. I know I’m rather absent lately… but I try to keep in touch as much as I can. Trust in your talent Tam, it’s something precious. A bientôt…
OH my GOD! I hope Alice is having a nightmare, she can’t be dead. Bette will be devistated that she was off having fun with Tina while her was being murdered. PPS so we can find out what is real and what is not.
O.M.F.G.TY! wow o cant call you a slacker now since i found out what you been doing looking for youre brains out there in Ohio*wink* im kidding you did a damn fine job lady and you should be very proud of youreself,You made the A.B.S.very proud tonite and everynite that is nice job.youre still missing what 25pages to beat MG!p.p.s. whats you cooking for dinner?????:)
Tam, That was so great!!! Very HOT!!!!!! I just hope Alice does not die. B&T are going top be so great together. They way you write is so heartfelt and loving Thank you
enjoyable right to the end….that was not nice…the end bit…pps
Damn that was hot, plase dont let Alice die!