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Hoops & Layups – Chapter 17
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I opened it. Tina was standing, looking cute.
“Are you ready to go?”
“Sure, let me put on my shoes”
“Bette, do you have a gym bag?”
“Sure, look in the hall closet. Tina I need to go to the bathroom”
When I came out, Tina was placing some clothes in it.
“What are you doing?”
“You will be needing this but I could not find your pj’s, where are they?”
“Don’t worry about them, I wont need them” I said.
“Well, let’s go. Everything else is in the cab ready to go”
I locked the door.
When we got in the cab, I asked “Are you going to tell me where we are going Tina?”
“Nope, it is a surprise. Don’t pout Bette even if it makes you look adorable and makes me want to kiss you”
That was what we did the rest of the ride.
Jon was there.
“Ready to go ladies” he asked.
“Yes we are”
Tina grabbed my hand and pulled me aboard.
“I will not tell you where we are going but I will say I love this place and no interruptions”
The plane ride was about a hour and a half. He landed on a private air strip. We got out and went into the house. Tina led me upstairs to a bedroom where we placed our bags. We went into the kitchen.
“Bette, can you please grab the picnic basket off the counter?”
“Tina where are we? So far this place is amazing the house is beautiful”
“This is the house I spent the summers in when I was a kid”
Tina grabbed my hand, lead me out to the car. We were driving for about ten minutes. She pulled the car over.
“Get out” she said.
“Ok Tina, so far this has been great but I draw the line, now you just pulled the car over in the middle of nowhere and you want me to get out. For all I know Dick Cheney could be out here with his friends”
“Ha” she said.
“Really T, accidents happen”
She got out and came to my side of the car, pulled out a blind fold, and took my hand. I got out.
Placing the blind fold in my hand, she said “I want to show you something beautiful and amazing. I want to surprise you. Putting this on says you trust me Bette, to lead you and not let you fall. Do you trust me?”
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Hey Tam!!! LMAO the first comment is lost in cyberspace. EEEK!Anyway, HOT HOT HOT!!! You write the love between these two so well. The ending now…Hmmm…that really was hard to read. I find myself being more reflective as the 4th of July comes upon us. It’s a harsh reality, but its a reality never the less. As far as your brains falling out…LMAO, nice visual, but I do think it’s time you give yourself some credit and stop putting yourself down. I admire your effort and courage to put yourself out there and be vulnerable. Every author who posts their work(s) does just that, and so please, try not to be so hard on yourself. I have seen so much progress in what you send along, and there have been many times that I have smiled because I have been able to watch that first draft grow each and every time, into something more and more amazing as you pull it together. I know I should be saying this in an email, so that it can match the same ones you send me, but I would rather post it here, and send you a one liner in the email. ROFLMAO!!!! Hugs and ttys.
Tylo, this was a fantastik chapter,,,I loved how Tina took Bette to her childhood summer home and took her to her fav place,,,,,and how they made love for the very first time, perfect!!! OMG I am so feeling the pain that Al is going thru will she make it? Oh I am the 1st to post so cool!!!
Okay so I am not the first to post,,LOL
WOOOOHOOO! Just tryin to calm my self down!Poor Al, I hope she stays strong.Other than that…let’s just say I read this chappy more than once!!!(~Wink!!!!)
Now that is pure hotness there! Thank you so much for writing this! You are the best!
Here you were showing us all this love that Bette and Tina share and then you have Alice tormented and shot in the chest. I hope that Alice makes it.
Wow that was awesome tylo! Tina finally tell Bette about her twin so hopefully she will be able to sleep a little better. Now what’s going on with Alice? I hope she’s not dead. Great post T! More please.
Thanks Tam for the emotions and feelings you share with your story. I know I’m rather absent lately… but I try to keep in touch as much as I can. Trust in your talent Tam, it’s something precious. A bientôt…
OH my GOD! I hope Alice is having a nightmare, she can’t be dead. Bette will be devistated that she was off having fun with Tina while her was being murdered. PPS so we can find out what is real and what is not.
O.M.F.G.TY! wow o cant call you a slacker now since i found out what you been doing looking for youre brains out there in Ohio*wink* im kidding you did a damn fine job lady and you should be very proud of youreself,You made the A.B.S.very proud tonite and everynite that is nice job.youre still missing what 25pages to beat MG!p.p.s. whats you cooking for dinner?????:)
Tam, That was so great!!! Very HOT!!!!!! I just hope Alice does not die. B&T are going top be so great together. They way you write is so heartfelt and loving Thank you
enjoyable right to the end….that was not nice…the end bit…pps
Damn that was hot, plase dont let Alice die!