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Hoops & Layups – Chapter 17
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I stood there for a few minutes, looking down at the blind fold then back at Tina, in her eyes with total trust in me.
“When you look at me like that how could I not?”
Tina stood behind me, with her body pressed to mine. My breath hitched.
“This is nice” she said.
She nipped my ear and placed the blind fold over my eyes.
Chapter 17
“O god I sighed…”
“Bette I am going to lead you just like this, right behind you with my body damn near on top of you. I will whisper in your ear how many steps you need to take so there is no reason to be afraid”
Tina placed her hands on my waist, her fingers spayed across each side of my stomach. My breathing ragged.
“T I can not walk, it is the furthest thing from my mind right now”
“Ok hold on one second”
I felt her breath on the back on neck. She picked up my hair, moved it to one side and placed small kiss on the nape of my neck. I started to moan, pressing my body into her. Then she stopped.
“Oh my God Tina” I said in a tortured tone.
“I know” she whispered, “Let’s go. I want you to walk straight ahead ten steps.
I was doing well then she said stopped.
She pulled me tight against her and whispered in my ear “Thank you for trusting me”.
Right then I thought my heart stopped.
“Now I need you take 5 steps then we are going to turn left ok”
I did, then we turned left.
“Now Bette I am letting you go to take the blind fold off, no peeking. She took it off.
“You can look now”
It was like nothing I had ever seen. There were butterflies everywhere as far as my eye could see.
“T this amazing how oh my god”
We sat down. I was taking in the moment Tina sitting there with white Lenin Capri’s with a peach sleeve less top and sandals and a sping aszure on her shoulder.
“Bette I am so glad you like it. I spent a lot of time here as a kid. I was amazed at all the butterflies. When I was a kid I was walking and thinking about telling my parent that I was bi and I discovered this place. There are over 7,000 species here. That one on your shoulder is the orange tiger and that is what it look like”
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Hey Tam!!! LMAO the first comment is lost in cyberspace. EEEK!Anyway, HOT HOT HOT!!! You write the love between these two so well. The ending now…Hmmm…that really was hard to read. I find myself being more reflective as the 4th of July comes upon us. It’s a harsh reality, but its a reality never the less. As far as your brains falling out…LMAO, nice visual, but I do think it’s time you give yourself some credit and stop putting yourself down. I admire your effort and courage to put yourself out there and be vulnerable. Every author who posts their work(s) does just that, and so please, try not to be so hard on yourself. I have seen so much progress in what you send along, and there have been many times that I have smiled because I have been able to watch that first draft grow each and every time, into something more and more amazing as you pull it together. I know I should be saying this in an email, so that it can match the same ones you send me, but I would rather post it here, and send you a one liner in the email. ROFLMAO!!!! Hugs and ttys.
Tylo, this was a fantastik chapter,,,I loved how Tina took Bette to her childhood summer home and took her to her fav place,,,,,and how they made love for the very first time, perfect!!! OMG I am so feeling the pain that Al is going thru will she make it? Oh I am the 1st to post so cool!!!
Okay so I am not the first to post,,LOL
WOOOOHOOO! Just tryin to calm my self down!Poor Al, I hope she stays strong.Other than that…let’s just say I read this chappy more than once!!!(~Wink!!!!)
Now that is pure hotness there! Thank you so much for writing this! You are the best!
Here you were showing us all this love that Bette and Tina share and then you have Alice tormented and shot in the chest. I hope that Alice makes it.
Wow that was awesome tylo! Tina finally tell Bette about her twin so hopefully she will be able to sleep a little better. Now what’s going on with Alice? I hope she’s not dead. Great post T! More please.
Thanks Tam for the emotions and feelings you share with your story. I know I’m rather absent lately… but I try to keep in touch as much as I can. Trust in your talent Tam, it’s something precious. A bientôt…
OH my GOD! I hope Alice is having a nightmare, she can’t be dead. Bette will be devistated that she was off having fun with Tina while her was being murdered. PPS so we can find out what is real and what is not.
O.M.F.G.TY! wow o cant call you a slacker now since i found out what you been doing looking for youre brains out there in Ohio*wink* im kidding you did a damn fine job lady and you should be very proud of youreself,You made the A.B.S.very proud tonite and everynite that is nice job.youre still missing what 25pages to beat MG!p.p.s. whats you cooking for dinner?????:)
Tam, That was so great!!! Very HOT!!!!!! I just hope Alice does not die. B&T are going top be so great together. They way you write is so heartfelt and loving Thank you
enjoyable right to the end….that was not nice…the end bit…pps
Damn that was hot, plase dont let Alice die!