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How hard Can it Be – Part 2
Dana sat on the stairs to Alice apartment building waiting for her Alice to come home. She had been waiting for twenty minutes before she decided to call Al and find out if she had decided that tonight would not be a good time for them to talk things through. Dana had just opened her cell phone and was scrolling down to find Alices number when she caught sight of Alices mini pulling up to the building. When Dana finally saw Alice approaching she quickly put her phone away and stood up to greet the blonde with a tentative smile. Dana what are you doing here? Alice asked surprised by her presence.
The smile, which hadnt been a huge smile in the first place, faded to nonexistence as Dana spoke. oh, um, you didnt get my message? Dana asked.
No I didnt, Dana Im sorry.
Oh, no, its, its cool. I just thought- Well, you left me that message- You know what, its alright. Ill just get going. We can do this another time. Dana relapsed into her nervous self and walked quickly past Alice back to where she had parked her car.
Alice closed her eyes tightly knowing that she had to call Dana to come back. *****. She muttered to herself. She was hoping to have more time to prepare a speech or something to tell Dana that she thought that it would be a good idea if they took a break for a little while. Dana! She called out trying, but not succeeding in keeping the reluctance out of her voice. You should come up for a while. Dana turned and now it was her turn for reluctance as she noticed Alices tone. Just come on, Dana! Alice called sensing Danas hesitation. When the athlete still didnt move Alice shot her a NOW! look and Dana slowly walked back toward the building and followed Alice up to her apartment
Shane and Carmen were both laying on the couch their movie once again forgotten as Shanes tongue moved slowly against Carmens and her hands moved gently over the smooth, dark skin underneath Carmens shirt. They had been this way for a long time now and both women were starting to get breathless as Shane left Carmens lips and kissed her way to her neck. Mmmm Carmen half moaned in pleasure and half groaned in disappointment as she caught a glimpse of the time just as Shanes hands finally found their way to her *****.
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(41 votes, average: 3.51 out of 5)
Thanks for letting me read your fic. I think that you know exactly each characters, specially Shane and Carmen..Please keep going…
I love this but I do hope that dana picks alice as they are so good together please post soon can’t wait to see what happens next
Just please keep going , you know how to write Shand and Carmen I like it very much . 5 STARS!!!
‘I’ got butterflies when i read that! beautifully written, x
The ending was soo cute,please post more soon.
I really like your fic. Please continue.
This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL,AMAZING .The way you wrote Shane/Carmen I nearly cried ,beautiful simply beatiful. I hope you plan on updating soon and please con. writing about Shane/Carmen.
This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL,AMAZING .The way you wrote Shane/Carmen I nearly cried ,beautiful simply beatiful. I hope you plan on updating soon and please con. writing about Shane/Carmen.
“Lara is the fun one” this made me laugh quiet a bit. I wish the writers thought more like you–there can be danish drama without all the weird character assination. Keep up the good work.
That was great! Shane and Carmen are so cute. i hope Shane tells Carmen more about her past.
Really good job, go on!!!
Awsome….sad there wasnt more of it..what happens? does shane wake up?
I love reading your story. Shane and Carmen are so cute together. I can’t wait for the next update and thank you for writing.
how about ‘how hard could this be?’ like Alice said, since its wat she and im assuming shane and carmen too
for the title i mean lol