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How hard Can it Be – Part 2
Bye! Carmen called out trying not to be hurt at the fact that Shane had not even kissed her goodbye
Dana sat on the couch waiting for Alice to get out of the shower. She knew that the blonde had not needed an immediate shower, she just needed some time to piece together something to say and Dana was respecting that, but she wished Alice would hurry up because if she took too much longer Alice was going to have a little puddle on her amazingly expensive couch. After five more minutes Dana heard the shower turn off and was amazed at the short amount of time between that and when Alice appeared in front of her. Hey. Thanks for letting me take a shower. Alice said distractedly.
No problem. Dana tried to read Alices face, but she couldnt.
Dane, I think-
I missed you, Al. They both said at the same time.
When Alice heard Dana speak and the sincerity in the statement she couldnt help the smile that spread across her face. Really? She asked hopeful that she wouldnt have to tell Dana to take some time to see how she felt.
Of course, Al. I love you. She said as she went over and hugged Alice close. But before we go any further I really gotta pee. Alice smiled again, not realizing how much she missed Danas goofy facial expressions. While Dana ran off toward the bathroom, Alice sat down on the couch grinning. Danas phone rang and Alice reached over into her purse and grabbed it so that she could shout to Dana who was calling, but when she saw the number on the caller ID Alice stopped and her smile faded as she recognized Laras phone number.
Did my phone ring, Al? Dana asked as she came back into the living room.
Uh, yeah, do you think we could talk first though? Alice asked quietly.
Yeah. Dana said oblivious to Alices mood change. She sat down across from Alice on the couch and waited patiently for whatever Alice had to say.
Dana? Ive been thinking and I think that you and I should slow down a little.
Alice? Dana asked not quite understanding.
I think that we should take some time to figure out if we made the wrong choice. Alice fought to keep any emotion out of her voice. She didnt want Dana to worry about her or their friendship, she just wanted her to know that it was ok for her to take some time to figure out what she wanted.
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(41 votes, average: 3.51 out of 5)
Thanks for letting me read your fic. I think that you know exactly each characters, specially Shane and Carmen..Please keep going…
I love this but I do hope that dana picks alice as they are so good together please post soon can’t wait to see what happens next
Just please keep going , you know how to write Shand and Carmen I like it very much . 5 STARS!!!
‘I’ got butterflies when i read that! beautifully written, x
The ending was soo cute,please post more soon.
I really like your fic. Please continue.
This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL,AMAZING .The way you wrote Shane/Carmen I nearly cried ,beautiful simply beatiful. I hope you plan on updating soon and please con. writing about Shane/Carmen.
This was absolutely BEAUTIFUL,AMAZING .The way you wrote Shane/Carmen I nearly cried ,beautiful simply beatiful. I hope you plan on updating soon and please con. writing about Shane/Carmen.
“Lara is the fun one” this made me laugh quiet a bit. I wish the writers thought more like you–there can be danish drama without all the weird character assination. Keep up the good work.
That was great! Shane and Carmen are so cute. i hope Shane tells Carmen more about her past.
Really good job, go on!!!
Awsome….sad there wasnt more of it..what happens? does shane wake up?
I love reading your story. Shane and Carmen are so cute together. I can’t wait for the next update and thank you for writing.
how about ‘how hard could this be?’ like Alice said, since its wat she and im assuming shane and carmen too
for the title i mean lol