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I Fall Behind pt.11
“So you never saw her again?” Shane asked.
“Not until two nights ago.”
Alice’s face slowly showed her dawning realization.
“Two nights ago? What, did you run into her on your way to my place?” Bette looked up, still frowning.
“I ran into her when you opened your front door.”
At Bette’s stunned look and the utter silence that blanketed the group, Tina laughed.
“See? Can tell a good story or what? And it’s a true story too!”
While Bette stammered and started fidgeting
nervously, Alice, Dana, and Shane nodded in approval at Tina. Shane
caught Kit’s eye from across the room and furtively gave her an OK sign
with her fingers.
“Bette, are you ready to go? What time do you need to be at work?” Tina nonchalantly asked.
“Oh, God. Now. I need to go now.” Bette was obviously flustered.
“Okay. Have a good day at work!” Tina watched Bette
closely. It’s now or never. “Are we still on for tonight?”
Bette’s thoughts were flying a mile a minute. What
did Tina mean? Am I the woman she was talking about? Am I the woman who
“captivated and enthralled” her? WHAT? I can’t handle this. No no
no…. Oh God… I’m dying… I’m plummeting to a sure death impaled on
stakes like in one of those adventure-thrillers in the movies…
Tina’s endless caring eyes caught her.
Bette took a deep breath and released it slowly. She
looked around. She saw her friends pretending to be otherwise occupied.
She saw Kit rubbing at a stubborn stain on the counter. She saw people
at the other tables having their cups of coffee, plates of bagels,
croissants, sandwiches, etc.
Tina’s endless caring eyes caught her and put her to right.
“Yes, Tina… I believe we’re still on for tonight.”
Tina released the breath she was holding and smiled widely. After a beat, Bette smiled back.
TBC
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(70 votes, average: 3.39 out of 5)
Our Betty did grow up, and Tina story started it. Watch out world Bette Porter is back. thanks
Bette is sooo adorable!
im luvin it!
im haviang so much fun with this story. the way you describe bette and tina especially. i couldl just see bette, panting trying not to have a panic attack. lmao thanks
this is so cool… tina as the hunter… i love it…please continue
I so love this story!
i don’t know what drew me to read your story, but i have and all of them in one shot… bloody brillant, very funny. One quick question ( if you wish), where does 7pm come from? Looking forward to the ensuing chapters…shortly?!! Hopefully.
Good chapter. Love your Bette and Tina and let see what’s next, thanks!
3 beers huh…. you’d be a great date!!! Your answer to 7pm leaves me with more questions… but I’ll just remain curious. Cheers luv.
poor bette…I just glad she can get out of the house.
great update!!!!!!!!!! bring it on post soon
At this point in time this is such a great story to wake up to..fun,light,comical, you write this change in characters so well…I’m trying to avoid all the bs that I know will follow with errr tina being a….bu t until then pls post soon…tks
Thanks for posted that was great OMG! Bette really shock that maybe she is the ONE Tina talking about LOL! OK! I’m Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!
f*ck, this is the last chapter. i just read four straight and now it’s over. wah!
Bette, Dr.Techie says: pop a Xanax before your date tonight…and lean back, lean back. This anxiety disorder thing seems to be working for her, though. She’s managed to captivate Weho’s most famous courtesan, and it makes for an amusing read for the rest of us. Thanks for starting my day off on a comical note! BTW – I’ll have the meatlover’s breakfast with coffee and orange juice. You can hold that vegan shake for the next person. Thanks!
I just love how Tina (and you) are handling Bette. Bette is so nervous, yet giddy, it’s fun to watch. so unusual for such a strong woman.
and life goes on and bette is growing up and tina is the one who’s changing it all….and i can’t stop giggling, love this story
Hi all! I’m sorry I couldn’t post the next chapter sooner. I’m too drunk right now to write anything, except this comment. I don’t drink often so 3 beers kinda hit me hard.7 pm came from what time it was when i registered to the forum :) fitting coz i was obsessed with 7 of 9 once upon a time.
I love this story. Hope u have many more chapters to go.
you make me smile with this story. Thank you so very much.