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I Fall Behind pt.11
“How much does this goop cost anyway? You know, in
case I wanted to have a glass someday,” Bette asked casually. After Kit
told her, Bette beamed at her sister and went back to their table.
“Here, Tina. It’s 6 dollars 30 cents.”
Tina looked at her strangely, but retreived money
from her purse. Alice stared pointedly at Bette and mouthed “What
the *****?” Bette just shrugged, as if to say, what did I do?
After handing Bette the money, Tina took a sip and scowled. Bette saw it and hid her smile.
“Bette, Tina was just telling us about your date last night…” Alice started.
Bette pretended to be intent on spreading jam on her bagel and didn’t comment. Tina shook her head at Alice.
“… and she said you were very nice.”Alice finished
lamely. She scowled at Tina, who smiled gratefully. Alice wondered why
she wasn’t even allowed to rib Bette a little bit. Was the date that
bad? But why were they having breakfast together? Maybe it went very well.
Alice’s eyes narrowed and looked consideringly between Bette’s bowed
head and Tina’s doting gaze. What was this? And why was Tina on a
second date with Bette anyway? And what was with the interrogation
yesterday? The details of the past two days were suddenly catching up
to Alice. Without Dana stripping to distract her, Alice was swiftly
piecing together the facts.
“I bet you guys had a great time.” Shane added, without a trace of innuendo.
“Yeah.” Dana piped up. “Doesn’t Bette tell the most
interesting stories? Did she tell you about the time she got lost in a
Hong Kong night market? Candace spent three hours looking for her… Uh
oh…” Dana wanted to bite her tongue. She couldn’t believe she just
said the C-word, the word that caused Bette’s face to fall and Alice’s
foot to collide with her shin.
“No, she didn’t tell me about that,” Tina answered
smoothly. She noticed that Bette had let her bread fall on her plate
and realized that Candace must be the woman that Alice merely refered
to as “She Who Must Not Be Named”.
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Our Betty did grow up, and Tina story started it. Watch out world Bette Porter is back. thanks
Bette is sooo adorable!
im luvin it!
im haviang so much fun with this story. the way you describe bette and tina especially. i couldl just see bette, panting trying not to have a panic attack. lmao thanks
this is so cool… tina as the hunter… i love it…please continue
I so love this story!
i don’t know what drew me to read your story, but i have and all of them in one shot… bloody brillant, very funny. One quick question ( if you wish), where does 7pm come from? Looking forward to the ensuing chapters…shortly?!! Hopefully.
Good chapter. Love your Bette and Tina and let see what’s next, thanks!
3 beers huh…. you’d be a great date!!! Your answer to 7pm leaves me with more questions… but I’ll just remain curious. Cheers luv.
poor bette…I just glad she can get out of the house.
great update!!!!!!!!!! bring it on post soon
At this point in time this is such a great story to wake up to..fun,light,comical, you write this change in characters so well…I’m trying to avoid all the bs that I know will follow with errr tina being a….bu t until then pls post soon…tks
Thanks for posted that was great OMG! Bette really shock that maybe she is the ONE Tina talking about LOL! OK! I’m Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!
f*ck, this is the last chapter. i just read four straight and now it’s over. wah!
Bette, Dr.Techie says: pop a Xanax before your date tonight…and lean back, lean back. This anxiety disorder thing seems to be working for her, though. She’s managed to captivate Weho’s most famous courtesan, and it makes for an amusing read for the rest of us. Thanks for starting my day off on a comical note! BTW – I’ll have the meatlover’s breakfast with coffee and orange juice. You can hold that vegan shake for the next person. Thanks!
I just love how Tina (and you) are handling Bette. Bette is so nervous, yet giddy, it’s fun to watch. so unusual for such a strong woman.
and life goes on and bette is growing up and tina is the one who’s changing it all….and i can’t stop giggling, love this story
Hi all! I’m sorry I couldn’t post the next chapter sooner. I’m too drunk right now to write anything, except this comment. I don’t drink often so 3 beers kinda hit me hard.7 pm came from what time it was when i registered to the forum :) fitting coz i was obsessed with 7 of 9 once upon a time.
I love this story. Hope u have many more chapters to go.
you make me smile with this story. Thank you so very much.