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I Fall Behind pt.11
“I tell good stories too.” Tina continued, looking
at Bette who refused to raise her eyes. “Let me tell you about the time
I saw an awesome woman right here a The Planet, ” She addressed the
story to the three friends who looked stricken, but she was looking
only at Bette. “It was… I don’t know… four years ago?
I was with my friend Jenny. We sat out there, by the
window. We were talking about something, I don’t remember anymore.”
Tina paused, and was glad to see Bette ***** her head very slightly in
her direction.
“Well, I was having a frappuccino, nothing like this
goo. Sorry Dana.” Tina chucked and noticed Bette’s small smile.
“So, there I was, still sleepy coz it was so early,
about to drop into my frappuccino, when I saw this vision coming out of
the doors.” Tina almost giggled when she saw Bette’s almost
imperceptible scowl. Her head was still bowed but Bette was listening
intently and responding to her story. Time to crank it up a notch.
“I was jolted awake when I saw this woman… She was
gorgeous! She took my breath away. I’d never reacted to anyone like
that before, and I’ve never reacted like that ever since. There was
something about her that seemed to…” Tina tried to capture the
feeling she had that morning in words. “… She seemed to pull me to
her and I wanted to run to her. I wanted to grab her, and… and kiss
her!” Tina laughed, a bit self-conscious. “But more than that, I wanted
to ask her why she looked so sad. I wanted to tell her that everything
would be alright.”
“She must’ve looked pathetic.” Bette muttered.
“She was the most beautiful woman I’ve ever seen. Inside out, you know?”
Alice, Dana and Shane were listening raptly.
“Haven’t you ever had that experience?” Tina
addressed the entire table, even though her attention was focused on
Bette. “When someone just captures you. Someone just enthralls you, and
you can’t even say why? And you can’t get away, can’t stop thinking
about them, even when you know you’ll never see them again?”
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Our Betty did grow up, and Tina story started it. Watch out world Bette Porter is back. thanks
Bette is sooo adorable!
im luvin it!
im haviang so much fun with this story. the way you describe bette and tina especially. i couldl just see bette, panting trying not to have a panic attack. lmao thanks
this is so cool… tina as the hunter… i love it…please continue
I so love this story!
i don’t know what drew me to read your story, but i have and all of them in one shot… bloody brillant, very funny. One quick question ( if you wish), where does 7pm come from? Looking forward to the ensuing chapters…shortly?!! Hopefully.
Good chapter. Love your Bette and Tina and let see what’s next, thanks!
3 beers huh…. you’d be a great date!!! Your answer to 7pm leaves me with more questions… but I’ll just remain curious. Cheers luv.
poor bette…I just glad she can get out of the house.
great update!!!!!!!!!! bring it on post soon
At this point in time this is such a great story to wake up to..fun,light,comical, you write this change in characters so well…I’m trying to avoid all the bs that I know will follow with errr tina being a….bu t until then pls post soon…tks
Thanks for posted that was great OMG! Bette really shock that maybe she is the ONE Tina talking about LOL! OK! I’m Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!!
f*ck, this is the last chapter. i just read four straight and now it’s over. wah!
Bette, Dr.Techie says: pop a Xanax before your date tonight…and lean back, lean back. This anxiety disorder thing seems to be working for her, though. She’s managed to captivate Weho’s most famous courtesan, and it makes for an amusing read for the rest of us. Thanks for starting my day off on a comical note! BTW – I’ll have the meatlover’s breakfast with coffee and orange juice. You can hold that vegan shake for the next person. Thanks!
I just love how Tina (and you) are handling Bette. Bette is so nervous, yet giddy, it’s fun to watch. so unusual for such a strong woman.
and life goes on and bette is growing up and tina is the one who’s changing it all….and i can’t stop giggling, love this story
Hi all! I’m sorry I couldn’t post the next chapter sooner. I’m too drunk right now to write anything, except this comment. I don’t drink often so 3 beers kinda hit me hard.7 pm came from what time it was when i registered to the forum :) fitting coz i was obsessed with 7 of 9 once upon a time.
I love this story. Hope u have many more chapters to go.
you make me smile with this story. Thank you so very much.