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    I Will Not Let You Fall

    Story written on September 9, 2017 by Valerie.
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    Her Lexus Convertible came into her field of vision and she proceeded to move toward it. She rummaged in her pants’ pocket and took out a set of car keys. Flopping down into the driver’s seat, Bette fumbled with the keys and the ignition, and after making a number of unsuccessful attempts to insert the

    Her Lexus Convertible came into her field of vision and she proceeded to move toward it. She rummaged in her pants’ pocket and took out a set of car keys. Flopping down into the driver’s seat, Bette fumbled with the keys and the ignition, and after making a number of unsuccessful attempts to insert the right key, she eventually dropped the entire set on the floor. Mumbling expletives, she picked up the keys and made another effort. Now with the key in the ignition, Bette started the car and pressed the accelerator pedal to the floor, causing the car to lurch forward with tyres screaming in protest.

    She finally managed to straighten the vehicle onto the road, but not without having brushed against a lamppost, ripping off one of the side mirrors. Riding the route she knew by heart, Bette drove down the nearly empty Santa Monica Boulevard, constantly changed the speed from overly low to overly high and back, swerved dangerously all the way, yet somehow avoided any fatal collision. She succeeded to follow the needed turn, although because of veering too far to the right she slid past another car that stood peacefully on the side of the road.

    When Bette lastly reached the destination, she stopped the engine and let herself out of the vehicle. She stood swaying in the middle of the street, narrowing her eyes for a moment to focus in on the house’s windows, between the two of which she planned to choose. She bent over to pick up several small pebbles from the ground and then walked up closer to the fence. Hurling a pebble at the chosen window, she watched as it snapped off the window and no movement behind the window followed. The brunette stumbled slightly before lifting her arm and firing another pebble. The next pebble ricocheted off the window onto the eave that hung over the front door with a loud clatter.

    Finally, a light came on in the window. Bette saw a female figure with blonde hair peeking out, screwing her eyes to see who was there and then disappearing. She waited at the gate until she heard the lock in the front door being opened with a woman in pajamas stepping out on the porch and switching on the light.

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    1. Oh god Valerie, i am so happy that you updated again.

      The plot thickens, Marcus dead, Bette knowing that Helena is a cop, Melvin at the scene who bailed Bette out of jail, Tina who left Bette but still loves Bette and Bette visiting Tina in the middle of the night and scaring her.

      So many things are happening and Bette spiralling out of control due to all of that.

      I understand Tina leaving Bette but she is the one that was able to Hold Bette back and now that Bette lost her she doesn’t give a shit what will happen with herself.

      I still have faith that somehow everything will end well and held hope out from the story title ” I Will Not Let You Fall ”

      Thank you so much for for this incredible story!

    2. Wow Valerie:

      What a chapter, poor Bette, poor Tina, they love each other, but it will be hard to stay together if things don’t change; I hope Bette change her life, now that Marcus is dead. But the question is who killed Marcus, I don’t think is the police, maybe he was killed in a mafias’ war, or perhaps is her own boss Dr. Arnodelo, who wanted to intimidate her or to remove Marcus from protecting Bette, at the end the same Arnodelo made her kill Dominic, his own family, why not to kill Marcus and then Bette and blame on them all the crime he has done. Bette has to do the first move and change sides, she needs a deal with the police and to give them Arnodelo in exchange for protection for her and Shane. Melvin is too late, he could help Bette before she reached this point, now it’s too late; and now he also blames everything on her, as if he hadn’t pushed her in the hell that she is now.
      Helena, of course, is a bitch, but what else could she do, she is an undercover cop. I hope Tina would realize, of what she has awakened in Bette and decide to go back to her.
      That was a wonderful chapter Valerie, I hope you may post an update soon, this is a great story. Thanks

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    4. This story is wonderful, it left me with a heart in my hands, when I read each chapter. And more anxious to have no idea how the end of this story will be,
      without having to separate our couple, the more we know that every action has its consequences, and in one way or another bette will have to answer for their crimes.
      Unfortunately another blow in bette’s life, the loss of his friend Marcus, is sure to make him want revenge.
      All universe

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