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I Will Not Let You Fall

”About time,” Francesca muttered, her tone ill-natured.
”Boss, you spare no pity on us, do you?” Billie whined, pretending to gnash his teeth.
”We had business to sort out,” Shane replied.
”What business?” Billie wondered right away.
”And what’s so important about it?” Henry lifted his eyebrow.
”It’s always oh-so-important,” Francesca sneered.
Shane opened her mouth, ready to answer, but was cut off by Bette.
”That’s enough. In case you need a reminder, I’m not answering to any of you,” the brunette said forcefully, glaring at her subordinates. ”You, otherwise, do answer to me. So one of you is going to report to me right now while I’m listening very carefully.”
The gang members pouted.
”Long story short, a bartender at Richie’s told us some details about the guys and we tracked them down to their den in Glendale. They’ve been tight-lipped since we caught them, so we know nothing about them,” Catherine informed.
”Richie’s? Downtown?” Bette asked.
Catherine nodded.
”It’s an Irish Pub,” the brunette stated matter-of-factly, mostly speaking to herself.
”Well yeah,” Catherine said. ”So?”
This was getting more and more interesting, Bette thought to herself. She stared at her gang members vacantly for a moment before shaking her head a little. ”Never mind,” she mumbled and walked up to the entrance.
As soon as she came inside, she saw Mark and Tasha sitting by the wall, clearly there to keep an eye on the two men that were slouching in their chairs, their wrists and ankles bound. Bette drew closer, eyeing the men intently. She was yet to see their faces, for both men were sitting with their backs to her.
”Oh, hey, Bette,” Mark greeted as he and Tasha rose to their feet. ”The fuckers haven’t said a word since we found them. We tried to ask questions. Nothing,” he explained.
”You two leave,” Bette commanded to her partners, not breaking her hard gaze from the hostages.
Just as Mark and Tasha closed the door from the outside, Bette moved to stand in front of the men. Their heads were hung low, but Bette could see that their faces were cut and bleeding a little. They appeared barefooted, their clothes dirty and bloodstained here and there. The brunette drew closer and grabbed one of them by the hair, pulling at it to lift his bowed head. She studied his face carefully, turning his head from left to right. Dried blood trailed out of the side of his mouth, one of his eyes was nearly completely closed, swollen from blows onto it. She relinquished her grip of the man’s hair, letting his head fall limp on his chest. Then she stepped toward the other man and carried out the same inspection.
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Hi Valerie:
This is sad as you said, but it’s also a great story, Marcus has been murdered and his killers are dead, apparently, it was Arnodelo who planned his death and he may go after Bette and Shane.
What bothers me is that one of the killers said (before dying) that they had the protection of the cops, which for me it could mean that Arnodelo wants to show that Bette alone with her gang is the criminal head behind the drug trafficking, because, in that way, he will have a break from the police persecution, while Bette and the gang are murdered making appeared as it was a fight among gangsters.
Now, honestly, I think we have reached the point in which Bette and Shane have to make a decision, and I trust you, Valerie, that you will lead us, sooner or later, in this wonderful, and amazing rollercoaster-story to a happy end.
Thank you so much for this excellent and heartbreaking story, I will be waiting impatiently for the next chapter.
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I loveeeeee this dark story. Please update this soon.
Hey Valerie,
I am excited for the update, but i will read it in a few days. I need some happy and sweet and not sad and dark.
I truly enjoy your story and will follow it to the hopefully happy end.
Hey Valerie, i just read the chapter and boy you were right about warning us it was a sad one.
Especially the end where Tina took Bette in her arms and she finally broke down.
I still trust and hope that you stick to the title and that you will not let us and Bette fall.
It will be interesting to read how you are going to let Bette leave this mess and hopefully start a new life with Tina (and Shane) in Auckland. But that is my wish, maybe you have another end for this incredible story.
Thank you so much for for this incredible story!
I read the post 5 days ago and I’ve been contemplating about it since then. I definitely simpathize this Bette Porter, but I can’t decide for myself wether this is becouse it is still our Bette even if in a different incarnation, or because the circumstances of her life are so that we can’t help feeling pity for this woman. So what do you think, would we still like the main character if it were not Bette Porter ?