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    I Will Not Let You Fall

    Story written on November 21, 2017 by Valerie.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=94753
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    Inching back, Bette stared at them. ”My people gave you a slight beating, sorry for that. They shouldn’t have done it and will be punished,” she said in an almost friendly voice. Silence followed her statement. ”Do you know why you’re here?” Bette asked, crouching down. When received no answer again, she continued calmly, ”Let

    Inching back, Bette stared at them. ”My people gave you a slight beating, sorry for that. They shouldn’t have done it and will be punished,” she said in an almost friendly voice.

    Silence followed her statement.

    ”Do you know why you’re here?” Bette asked, crouching down. When received no answer again, she continued calmly, ”Let me tell then why you’re here. You’re here because you guys know something I want to know as well. I have no intention of complicating your life or end it, for that matter, this is just not in my interest at the moment. All I want is to talk, sort things out and then part our ways. I ask questions, you answer them truthfully, and we’ll be fine. If you don’t, then I’ll do stuff you’ve probably done to people all the time. You’ll find it familiar, or even might find out something new. I like to surprise people,” Bette smiled a killer smile. ”Anyway, the sooner you talk to me, the sooner you can get out of here. Have I made myself clear?”

    The man with the swollen eye raised his gaze at Bette. He seemed to be contemplating, while the other man sat keeping his head down, showing no reaction.

    ”We want guarantees.”

    Bette arched her brow. ”Guarantees?”

    ”Give us guarantees that you’ll let us go free once we’ve told you everything,” the man appealed.

    ”Oh, that…” Bette uttered, pretending. ”Well, all I can say is that you have no reason not to trust me. As I told you, I have no desire to take your life away. You don’t pose any threat to me. You’re both pawns, obviously. Someone controls you and tells you what to do. Someone sent you to kill a business partner and a personal friend of mine. Someone might as well tell you to kill me. Would you kill me just because you wanted to and not under someone’s order? I highly doubt it. So you see, that someone is the threat. That someone has to be taken care of. Not you. And this is my guarantee.”

    The hostages exchanged furtive glances. While the other man still refused to make eye contact with Bette and communicate, the one that had been talking clearly looked convinced.

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    1. Hi Valerie:

      This is sad as you said, but it’s also a great story, Marcus has been murdered and his killers are dead, apparently, it was Arnodelo who planned his death and he may go after Bette and Shane.

      What bothers me is that one of the killers said (before dying) that they had the protection of the cops, which for me it could mean that Arnodelo wants to show that Bette alone with her gang is the criminal head behind the drug trafficking, because, in that way, he will have a break from the police persecution, while Bette and the gang are murdered making appeared as it was a fight among gangsters.

      Now, honestly, I think we have reached the point in which Bette and Shane have to make a decision, and I trust you, Valerie, that you will lead us, sooner or later, in this wonderful, and amazing rollercoaster-story to a happy end.

      Thank you so much for this excellent and heartbreaking story, I will be waiting impatiently for the next chapter.

      P

    3. Hey Valerie,

      I am excited for the update, but i will read it in a few days. I need some happy and sweet and not sad and dark.

      I truly enjoy your story and will follow it to the hopefully happy end.

    4. Hey Valerie, i just read the chapter and boy you were right about warning us it was a sad one.

      Especially the end where Tina took Bette in her arms and she finally broke down.

      I still trust and hope that you stick to the title and that you will not let us and Bette fall.

      It will be interesting to read how you are going to let Bette leave this mess and hopefully start a new life with Tina (and Shane) in Auckland. But that is my wish, maybe you have another end for this incredible story.

      Thank you so much for for this incredible story!

    5. I read the post 5 days ago and I’ve been contemplating about it since then. I definitely simpathize this Bette Porter, but I can’t decide for myself wether this is becouse it is still our Bette even if in a different incarnation, or because the circumstances of her life are so that we can’t help feeling pity for this woman. So what do you think, would we still like the main character if it were not Bette Porter ?

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