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I Will Not Let You Fall
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”I’ve told you everything I know, let me go now,” Hank demanded, wincing in pain as he tried to move in the chair.
Bette finally broke her gaze from the slip of paper and looked at her hostage. She watched him for a moment before she went around him and untied his hands, making him moan. Then she untied his ankles and straightened up. She stood staring at him with something close to grim satisfaction while he struggled to move.
”Need some help?” Bette asked.
The man met her gaze and nodded. ”Take me to a hospital, can you?”
Bette remained motionless, not even budging a muscle, her cold dark brown eyes trying to bore a hole into the man’s face. ”I can take you somewhere else.”
Hank frowned. ”Where?”
”Somewhere special…” she added with a small, evil smile on her lips.
Before the man could register what was the meaning of the words, in one quick motion Bette raised her foot and shoved him backward against his chest, his chair going down with him. The blow pushed him back full force, and as soon as he hit the concrete floor, he rolled to the side and groaned.
”What the fuck!” he exclaimed with effort and coughed.
Bette walked up to him, kicked the chair away and flipped the man over with her foot so that he lay on his back. He was looking up at her towering figure tearfully and begging her for mercy.
”Please…I don’t want to die…” he sobbed, blood and snot seeping into his mouth. ”I’ll do whatever you want…please don’t kill me…”
”My friend didn’t want to die too,” Bette whispered.
”I’m sorry…” the man sobbed with desperation. ”It was a mistake… I didn’t want to kill anybody…”
”But you did.”
The man gazed at her miserably, not knowing what else to say. He kept crying as Bette pointed the gun at his chest and without a moment’s hesitation pulled the trigger. The sobbing sounds stopped, everything stopped. Bette eyed the man, counting to four, before she aimed a little lower and shot again. And then again. And again. And again. The body jerked convulsively under the impact of the bullets. Bette pulled the trigger one last time, striking right in the heart, before letting her hand that was gripping the gun fall to her side. She crouched down in front of the man’s bleeding body, closed her eyes and gave a weary sigh while her head was splitting from the steady drone in her ear-drums.
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Hi Valerie:
This is sad as you said, but it’s also a great story, Marcus has been murdered and his killers are dead, apparently, it was Arnodelo who planned his death and he may go after Bette and Shane.
What bothers me is that one of the killers said (before dying) that they had the protection of the cops, which for me it could mean that Arnodelo wants to show that Bette alone with her gang is the criminal head behind the drug trafficking, because, in that way, he will have a break from the police persecution, while Bette and the gang are murdered making appeared as it was a fight among gangsters.
Now, honestly, I think we have reached the point in which Bette and Shane have to make a decision, and I trust you, Valerie, that you will lead us, sooner or later, in this wonderful, and amazing rollercoaster-story to a happy end.
Thank you so much for this excellent and heartbreaking story, I will be waiting impatiently for the next chapter.
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I loveeeeee this dark story. Please update this soon.
Hey Valerie,
I am excited for the update, but i will read it in a few days. I need some happy and sweet and not sad and dark.
I truly enjoy your story and will follow it to the hopefully happy end.
Hey Valerie, i just read the chapter and boy you were right about warning us it was a sad one.
Especially the end where Tina took Bette in her arms and she finally broke down.
I still trust and hope that you stick to the title and that you will not let us and Bette fall.
It will be interesting to read how you are going to let Bette leave this mess and hopefully start a new life with Tina (and Shane) in Auckland. But that is my wish, maybe you have another end for this incredible story.
Thank you so much for for this incredible story!
I read the post 5 days ago and I’ve been contemplating about it since then. I definitely simpathize this Bette Porter, but I can’t decide for myself wether this is becouse it is still our Bette even if in a different incarnation, or because the circumstances of her life are so that we can’t help feeling pity for this woman. So what do you think, would we still like the main character if it were not Bette Porter ?