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I Will Not Let You Fall
Not feeling like digesting pancakes this morning, Tina just finished her coffee and exited the kitchen. She got in the shower and let the hot water seduce her body. As she lathered every curve, Tina reflected on those times Bette had made love to her in the shower, when Bette had backed her up to the shower wall, lifting her legs around her waist as she had fucked her until Tina couldn’t have pronounced her own name. She remembered the feel of Bette’s strong body against hers, the water pounding down over the top of them as they sucked each other’s souls out, losing all track of time. They had shared the passion that Tina had never felt ever since. Bette had made love to her in a way that had made Tina certain they were meant to be together forever.
Bracing herself against the wall, Tina closed her eyes and swallowed. She couldn’t believe she was indulging in such memories while her girlfriend of two years had just walked out of the house. Ashamed, Tina turned the shower punishingly colder, which was followed by a series of squeals.
After her contrast shower hydrotherapy, Tina dried her hair and smoothed on body lotion. She took her time applying makeup, lining her eyes and adding extra mascara. She also concealed the circles under her eyes with a light coating of foundation. Bette didn’t need to see her stress and lack of sleep that were permanently written on her face lately.
She chose a beige, pencil skirt, slightly above knee length, and paired it with a short wool jacket, a dusty pink lace blouse without sleeves underneath, also clinging to her slim upper body. She completed the look with three-inch sliver stilettos.
Surveying herself in the mirror, Tina thought she looked elegant and hopefully charming enough to attract Bette’s attention.
Slapping herself on the forehead, she muttered grumpily, ”Stop it already, goddammit.”
The first part of the day at work had been hectic, for the company was still dealing with the aftermath of yesterday’s incident. Tina had spent the whole morning running in and out of conference rooms, negotiating with the financier and the insurance company at the same time, while in some miraculous way the stack of file folders and papers on her desk kept growing like a mountain of slag.
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Great to see another chapter from you, thanks!
Ok, so Tina has long-term girl (thanks god she’s not Helena), but she’s not in love in her. It’s good. What’s not so good that her parents obviously like her girlfriend. And what’s bad – how Bette was cold during their meeting and how quickly she left. I just hope Bette will agree for next meeting with Tina.
So, waiting for the next!
Hi Valerie
Thank you for this wonderful chapter.
Wow, it was very easy to vanish the ten years of separation between them; after trying to move on and make their lives with other people, just one encounter and their hidden feelings came back, it couldn’t be different, their love was very intense, a love forever.
But if their love and life together ten years ago was hard due to Bette’s criminal life, and Tina’s fears and family situation; to pick up the pieces and glue them together now, won’t be easy.
Thanks, Valerie for this wonderful and interesting story and please post soon.
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Thanks for post.ing another chapter. I really enjoy this story. Looking forward to your next update.
WOW…
caught me by surprise seeing the update of my fav story….
but frankly 13 pages is not enough…lol… please update really soon.. can’t wait to see what will tina do to get back to bette’s life once again.. :-D
by the way…thank you so much for keeping the story.. :-)
I wonder why Bette is so hesistant to pick up where she and Tina left off. This story is so good. PPVS
Thank goodness, Helena is gone. I’m glad Sam is just friends with Tina. I don’t think I would have been able to stomach them together. LOL. Bette seems a lot more sexier, with her more bruting and mysterious self. I’m siding with Bette right now. Thank you so much for the update. I’ve been looking multiple times a day, since your last update.
Geez so heart wrenching. Tina seems on the out side to have moved on with her life but on the inside she’s a mess..Shes still living the next day ten years back when Bette told her to never come back…nothing has changed for her. Bette was in a bad place when she said it but she really didn’t mean it. She just didn’t want to hurt Tina or bring shame to her by being in that place. She loved her enough to let her go. The love is still there now if they can just get out of their own way and talk., they will find their love again. Thank you very much enjoying your story.
Thank you Valerie for the update, I just love this story. My heart aches for them both and hope they find away back to each other.
Wow, what a meeting! The tension is palpable from the page. I”m glad Tina kept in touch with Mrs. Carol and kept the property taxes paid. Now, how do they reconnect? Brenda is doomed to lose Tina. What an emotional ride? Keep posting and we will keep reading !
Oh wow Valerie, what a incredible good chapter!
Most of the others already comment and said it all.
Poor Tina, still so in love with Bette and then receiving such a coldness from Bette. But Bette is protecting her heart.
Let their journey back together begin!
Thanks for the update!
Thanks for the update.
Tina’s life seems to be lacking a lot. Hopefully the two of them can see a way to find each other again.
Enjoyed it a lot.
Thanks for the update.
Love this story and am longing for Tibette to be back together. Look forward to you achieving my wish!
PPS
SG
Am I too greedy to longing for your other story while I am so attracted with this one? You are a fantastic writer, I am thrilled wtih either story you would serve us, thanks for the awsome chapter!
My dear readers, thank you for all the wonderful comments and for encouraging me to keep writing! I really appreciate all of your support on my work!
You are a very good writer. We are fortunate to have you on this site! Keep blessing us with your work!
You never cease to amaze me with your ideas. This story is one I cannot forget. Please don’t stop posting.
It’s been awhile without a new chapter of this story…please…please…please….give us happiness with a progress of Bette and Tina’s relationship…thank you a bunch for sharing the story with us..????