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I Will Not Let You Fall
The blonde bit her lower lip. ”Work calls on Sunday. No way I’m gonna answer that,” she finished the statement with an edgy chuckle.
”You still do it,” Bette said.
Confused, Tina goggled at her. ”What?”
”You still bite you lips when you’re nervous.”
Tina waved her off dismissively and averted her eyes. ”I’m not nervous.”
Bette chose not to argue.
”So, what are your plans?” the blonde questioned.
Tilting her head to a side, Bette stared at her quizzically. ”My plans?”
”For the future,” Tina elaborated. ”How long is your parole?”
Bette’s mouth pulled into a lopsided smile. She closed her eyes and stretched her neck muscles. The smile then slipped from her lips as she opened her eyes and spoke, ”Let’s talk about you instead.”
Tina’s gaze started with Bette’s long legs and moved up her body before she met Bette’s gaze. Suddenly, it felt difficult to breathe under the rigid intensity of the look in those dark-brown eyes. Goose bumps prickled Tina’s arms as she spoke softly, ”What about me?”
Bette shrugged as if it didn’t matter much how Tina would choose to answer her own question. ”How you are holding up, for starters.”
”I told you. Work, home, work, home. Nothing special. Just living an ordinary, measured life.”
”Are you happy?”
Tina stared at her for a moment. Bette’s face remained calm and emotionless as she asked the question. Tina looked away at the ocean. ”Yeah. I am.”
Bette eyed Tina’s profile with interest. ”Good,” she said after a thoughtful pause. ”Then why are you here?”
Startled, the blonde turned to Bette, frowning and peering at her in puzzlement. ”What do you mean?” she asked, though she perfectly knew the meaning.
”That’s exactly what I mean – why you are here, with me.”
Tina’s throat grew dry. She felt mad at Bette’s ability to reach her innermost depths. ”What’s wrong with that?” she played dumb and immediately regretted it, for she knew the trick wouldn’t work with Bette.
The brunette shook her head, looking hopelessly at the woman in front of her, the woman that still held her heart, struggling to tell her the truth. ”I think you’re unhappy, Tina. That is why you insist on keeping in touch with me. We could’ve just solved the deal with the money and the apartment and then go our separate ways again,” Bette reasoned, her tone flat and smooth. Her gaze was unwaveringly fixed on Tina, who was looking back at her with an expression on her face that revealed her inner turmoil.
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Hi Valerie,
So happy to see a new update!
Unfortunately i am at work now. I hope to read it tonight. Just wanted to let you know that i will comment tonight or another day.
Xxx Bibi28
Valerie, Thank you for the update! This is one of my favorites. So happy to see that Tina is going to fight for Bette! Can’t wait for next update.
Thank you so much for the great update,I’ve been waiting patiently for you to post. I cant wait for the next part,please post soon.
Hi, happy to see another great (and long) chapter from you!
I must say about a few things about this part.
First – what i don’t like – i don’t like Nicole. I don’t trust her and i think she don’t fired Bette only because she wants her. I can see ultimatum for Bette from her in the future.
Ok, next what i like – i like two conversation – Tina wit therapist and Bette with Ayola – i think both Tina and Bette can see things more clear after this talks.
And of course the best part of chapter – Tina’s decision fight for Bette.
I must say i very like your mature Tina and i think Bette need to stop be scared and do leap of faith with her.
So, thank you for this part and waiting for next!
Hi Valerie:
This was a wonderful chapter, as you mentioned, maturity is taken its way on our couple, and they have the world on their hands, it’s their decision, all or nothing.
I’m glad they are finding their way to each other, there will be obstacles, like that stupid bully parol officer, the talkative Brenda and Bette boss, but Tina and Bette together, can overcome any barrier.
I start getting sad because this is the beginning of the end of this story, hope you keep updating the other, and maybe we could enjoy more stories from you.
Thank you for the update, I’ll eagerly wait for the next chapter.
P
oh my God…u’ve just made my day by update this story.. Thank you so much..
Hi Valerie,
Yes, Tina is going to fight for her Bette! About time, she has to show Bette that she has grown up and will not leave her when there are problems and there will be
That parole man is a utter asshole and what about Nicole, hmm. I hope she is trustworthy and isn’t going to use Bette’s past against her. For now i give her a chance.
Ayola has my respect, she is a very good friend. I love her.
Thank you for the update! It was worth the while!
Hi,
Great to have an update – love this story but would love Bette and Tina to start to make progress in getting back together.
Thanks for posting.
SG
Geez so much emotions going on… stubborn and lack of communication…. good think they both had someone to turn too… but then there is still Brenda… thank you it was great..
thank you so much for this wonderful long chapter.
I don’t blame Tina for behaving the way she did, I mean Bette was living a dangerous life style that would have easily put Tina at risk. am glad both are finding their way back to each other. But what happens with Brenda?. post soon plea……..se
Forgot to mention about Tina’s girfriend – seems it was not ease to Tina break up with her. First – because her parents like her, and second – Brenda obviously in love with her.
But i hope mature Tina know what she wants – and it’ll be Bette
Loved he update. Thanks
It was wonderful having the update. Hopefully they can come to terms with their feelings for each other and most of all, Bette needs to get over her fear of being let down by Tina in the future. Tina has laid down the gauntlet and Bette needs to meet her halfway and accept that Tina is truly still in love with her and wants a future with her. And Bette needs to forget the past and let it go, and run as fast as she can towards their future. Loved the update. Thanks for posting.
So happy to see an update. My heart broke for Tina when Bette pushed her away. The parole officer is a sadist. I hope Bette can keep her path until she no longer has to answer to him. He has treachery in his heart. Nicole will make a play for Bette to keep her secret. I think Bette needs to remove herself from this job. Tina has grown so much . She is willing to fight for Bette and chose her over family. The little girl is grown up. Please post again soon. Thank you.
It’s been 25 days..and i am dying to have an update of this story…give us some highlight of the day. Soon…pretty please?? :)