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I Will Not Let You Fall
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Tina just shook her head.
”Are you leaving me for Bette Porter?” Brenda suddenly asked.
The shock Brenda’s question gave her showed in her expression as Tina looked up at the woman. ”What?!”
Brenda smiled sadly.
”How do you know her?”
”Well, I heard some horrible things about her back in the day. Besides, she was a well known person in the lesbian community.”
”I mean, how do you know that she and I…um, dated?”
”I hadn’t had an idea you dated her, to tell you the truth. But today I visited your parents. I told them you broke up with me. Karen was there, too. She kind of enlightened me.”
Tina covered her face and expelled a dry chuckle devoid of humor. ”You went to MY parents to tell them I broke up with you,” she shook her head as she raised her sardonic gaze at Brenda. ”Are you kidding me?”
”They are my family as well.”
”What did my sister tell you?”
”Everything you should’ve told me. She told me that you and Bette were a big deal long time ago, then she went to prison, and you’ve been waiting for her.”
With every word Brenda said Tina felt more and more enraged by her sister’s nerve.
”Now that she is out, the wait has been worth it, huh?” Brenda was staring at Tina with disgust. ”You have been using me as a rebound.”
”This is ridiculous!” Tina yelled all of sudden. ”This is bullshit! I haven’t used you as no rebound! For fuck’s sake, Brenda! I was in a committed relationship with you and I didn’t plan on ending it! I didn’t even know when she was coming out of prison. Moreover, I thought she had been locked up for nineteen years, so I certainly didn’t wait for her! I had no idea she was out!”
”Karen was right. You’re leaving me for her. I can see by your strong reaction, how affected you are,” Brenda said, nodding. ”Have you slept with her already?”
”No,” Tina replied quietly, although breathing heavy, still seething. ”I haven’t cheated on you.”
”I bet you wanted to,” Brenda sneered and stood up. She paused for a moment, then looked at the blonde in wry surprise. She came up to where Tina was sitting and stared down at her, her eyes filled with contempt. ”I can’t believe you’re choosing that loser over me. Is this what your morals really are? Is this really you, Tina? Nobody in their right mind would end a healthy, stable relationship to go back to their criminal lover. She is a murderer, a monster. Or do you really believe she has changed? I’m sorry to disappoint you, but once a criminal always a criminal,” the woman asserted. ”So, are you sure in your decision, Tina? You are about to make a huge mistake. You will not be happy with her. I could forget the whole situation like some absurd joke if you want it. Just say a word and we are past this nightmare. Therefore, I’m asking you, for the last time. Are you sure you are leaving me for THAT?”
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WOW….Be the first to comment…:-D
thanks for the Update..I will read it first…then come back to give a comment… ^_^
Hi Valerie:
This was a wonderful and emotional chapter. It was time for Tina, to face her family especially her sister, Karen is really a bitch, she didn’t have the right to talk to Brenda; she didn’t do that out of love for Tina, on the contrary, I think she is stupid and envious.
Although it has been difficult, it was good for Tina to tell her mother the truth.
Now, it is up to them, Bette and Tina to talk and decide what to do.
The apartment where Tina lives is it in the same building where Bette has her old apartment?; is Tina living in the apartment that was Mrs. Caroll’s?
In this chapter, I feel a turning point, all the hopes of both girls, their love, is at stake, whether they decide from their feelings and resolve, will determine their future.
Thank you very much for this incredible chapter, I’ll be eagerly waiting for your update.
P
Hello, proteonomics! :)
The place they were at was Bette’s old apartment. When Bette told Tina she wanted to take her home and then asked her in the cab to name the address, Tina just named the address of Bette’s apartment.
Hi! Great to see new update from you!
So,
1) Tina’s family – like always, besides her brother, other members complite jerks. Karen – spoiled brat and i little surprised that Tina didn’t hit her. And Tina’s father – i think he’ll try to damage Bette freedom.
2)Brenda. In comments to previous chapter some readers pitied her – i think after this chapter they’ll stop doing it.
For me – i didn’t understand how Tina was involved with her in first place. Because – oh my god, she’s talking all the time. She never shut her mouth. How can anyone live with with someone, who never shut up? Rejected bitch
3) Bette. I understand where it came from, but still little disappointed in her behavior towards Tina. Why she not answered on her calls and messages?
Pull out stick from your ass, Bette and claim again your woman)
Thanks you for great chapter and waiting for the next!
Wow every nicly written..so much love. Yet so much ugly outside that door.. geez..Thank you. .
I forgot one thing – i’m curious about where is Tina’s apartment too
Hi, Zhenya!
Check out my reply to proteonomics. ;)
Yeah, i see. Thanks for the explanation.
Hi Valerie,
A very emotional chapter for both our girls.
My god, Karen is one evil, heartless bitch!!! I can’t believe the shit and cruel words that she said. Just horrible.
I am worried that Tina’s father is gonna try to put Bette behind bars again, Bette must be careful, still curious who that other woman is in the previous chapter.
Bette behaviour towards Tina isn’t nice, she could have texted Tina, but i can understand she is still cared and insecure about Tina motives and will to fight for her.
Tina was so young back then, but left Bette to many times while she had promised Bette to be there for her, so i understand Bette’s hesistation.
But the of the chapter gives me hope that they are back on the road.
Brenda, what a crazy woman, glad that Tina dumped her!
Thanks for the update!
Hi Valerie,
Well I’m in an emotional heap!
Thanks for the post.
I can only say ‘Ditto’ to everything Bibi28 said!
Thanks again, please post soon:-)
SG
I’m back to leave a comment,
When Tina said the address, and how Bette reacted..i knew at that moment that Tina gave the apartment address…i knew tina wont bring bette to her house cos she still living with brenda (i assume, it will take time for tina to move out from the house after she broke up with brenda), so she insisted to go to the apartment..is it Bette’s apartement??? Cos it was Bette who unlocked the door..and tina had melancholy feeling over the apartment..
And the blue eye woman from previous chapter, was it Karen? Is that how she knew that Bette has been released from prison?
My curiousity is..why karen is such a bitch to tina n bette? I thought she like Bette..after all she let Bette came into the house in the middle of the night to meet tina, right?
I’m worry about what Tina’s father would do to Bette…he put Bette in prison once…there’s no doubt that he could do it again..Bette really have to be careful now…
Tks for the lovely chapter…i hope more progress for tina n bette in the next.. :)
Perfect … just perfect (and a little short ;) )
Just caught up with chapters again, not able to read until now. Some sister Karen is, what the heck is her problem and why is she having Tina so much? A bit jealous I guess. Especially after her yelling what she did to Tina. If not mistaken, Tina owns her own home and Brenda had moved in with Tina. Please don’t let Tina’s father be an a__hole and cause Bette to go back to prison. Who was it that bumped into Bette outside the parole officer? I first thought it might be Shane, since she described the person with blue eyes. Thanks for posting.
I love this story so much. Thank you and please post soon!
Although there are so many new great stories. About Tibette but i never forget this one..cos it’s one of my fav of all…and It’s almost 2 months since the last chapter..I hope you didnt’t forget about this story..please update soon… tks
Hoping for an update soon?!