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I Will Not Let You Fall
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Bette leaned towards the blonde and pressed a gentle kiss to her lips. She then smiled. ”I’m fine, Tee.”
They were standing in line at the cash register when in the window Bette caught a sight of a black SUV parked at the far end of the store’s parking lot. Her anxious glance flitted to different spots of the parking lot as if searching for any more suspicious signs. Tiny beads of sweat started forming on her forehead as her anxiety grew with each passing second. She could feel it – somebody was watching her, following her every move. She could feel someone standing behind her, felt the threatening heat of someone’s body, felt someone breathing against her neck. An overbearing feeling of danger swept over her and she swallowed hard.
A hand touched her from behind. Like a flash, Bette spun around and shoved the person violently away, so that the man fell against the racks. Items from the shelves scattered across the floor along with the man’s basket and it’s contents. People started to fuss around, speaking loudly and calling Bette names. Tina dashed to help the man, looking very worried and upset. Bette stood as if rooted to the spot, her eyes wide and her mind reeling with shock at her own actions. She turned her head back toward the window, but the black SUV was gone. Closing her eyes, Bette breathed a long, deep sigh, feeling like she could absolutely burst with frustration and shame.
”Ma’am, you must leave now,” the store’s security guard said to her.
Bette threw one last remorseful glance at the poor man, who was shouting at her, threatening her with a lawsuit while Tina tried to calm him down by apologies and sweet talk. The brunette hurried outside and strode over to Tina’s car. Waiting, she propped her elbows against the car roof and held her head in her hands, hating herself for what she had just done.
Several minutes later, Tina came walking out of the store without any purchase. She stopped once she reached her car and stared at Bette with worry and sadness.
Locking eyes with the blonde, Bette was unable to find words and explain herself.
”When we come home, I hope you will talk to me,” Tina said in a gentle, but firm voice and got in the car.
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Hi Valerie:
Thanks for this long waiting chapter, a wonderful one. I love Tina, how patient she is with Bette, how understanding, of course, she can see how distressful is her girlfriend.
I’m very worried about Bette, she is very fragile, all her fairs and mistakes, of course, she is traumatized with all her past and her wrong choices.
I don’t think it is in Bette’s mind, I believe someone is following her, who may be: Tina’s ex or Tina’s family; the gang for which Bette worked before; the drug cartel; the crazy PO; Helena, her own father Melvin. Bette had so many foes, but I’m also worried as Bette is for that SUB.
I like that Tasha and Bette are friends again, Bette needs many friends now. Good that Shane is okay, I hope she is out of troubles now.
I don’t like Tina’s sister at all. And I don’t like the PO either. I wish that time passes fast and Bette would soon be totally free.
Thank you very much for this wonderful chapter, I will be eagerly waiting for the next one.
P
Hi! Thanks for the chapter!
A few thought:
1) Now we know what wrong with Karen – she just a jealouse spoiled brat.
2) I don’t think Bette owe Tasha apollogy at all – in the past they both doing their job, it’s not Bette’s fault that Tasha was too incompetent and allowed Bette to escape. And not forget – Bette saved her life.
3) I hope Bette in next chapter will tell Tina about black SUV.
Waiting for the next!
Bette needs to tell Tina about black SUV ASAP!
Bette PO asshole indeed.
I like how Bette handle the situation with Sam and muffin.
Thank you for the update and waiting for more!
Hi Valerie,
So glad to read a update from you!!!! You stayed away for a long time!
I am very happy that Tina is so caring and understanding to Bette, she takes charges and won’t back away. They have a good relationship, stronger than ever.
About Tasha, they both made mistakes and payed dearly for it, they both apologized and i hope they will develop a friendship. I think Tasha is the one who will help Bette again in the future.
I am worried about Bette, she is fragile and deeply traumatized from her past and i think she isn’t paranoia about the SUV following her, it could be everyone. She must let Tina in about everything. About the SUV and Nicole, the PO, etc.
Karen is a ass first class and will try to destroy Bette’s and Tina’s relationship, but they are so much stronger and Tina will not let that happen, she will fight for Bette.
Shane is allright, that must be a relief for Bette, maybe she is at the same place as Kit and i hope they will reunite in the future again and can live her life without angst and fear and really start over.
Truly amazing chapter!!!
Agree with all your comments
I think Tina has learned a lot from their previous relationship and not making the same mistake As before, now she is more understanding, more caring, more loving, less selfish, less demanding, she really want to work on her relationship with Bette. It shows how mature she has become..
And Karen..still believing my previous statement..i think she like Bette, and she was jealous of her own sister, for having Bette’s love after all this time.
The black SUV, i think most probably is her old criminal boss or Tina’s dad, i don’t think as a surgery, Brenda would have a lot of time following bette around..(but who knows…if she decided taking revenge to bette as first priority…hahahaha)
Anyway, thank you for the chapter Valerie, hope you’ll give the next one a little bit faster..cos everyone is waiting for it..lol
Bette’s old boss in pricon with life-sentence verdict. And you forgot about another option – Bette’s old “friend”, dirty cop whose name begin on “H”
Bette’s old boss in pricon with life-sentence verdict. And you forgot about another option – Bette’s old “friend”, cop whois name begin on “H”
Forgot to add – i really don’t understand Kit. Your sister bought you new life, give you her house – and you not trying to speak with her more than 10 years? You even don’t know if she live or not. What the sister are you?
Hi,
Thanks so much for coming back with this Story.
Really enjoyed it as instructed.
Agree with all the comments in fact enjoy reading them as they add to the pleasure on reading your Story.
Please post again soon
SG
I feel Bette will tell Tina.. she loves her and trusts her. She has to say something shes going to go crazy. Yeah Sam has a thang for our Blonde, Tina just doesnt see it. I believe Bette needs a better job. Lol.
Glad Tasha and Bette spoke and cleared the air. Thank you, waiting on next chapter.
Only catch up all this story – thank you!
I must say it’s very good and interesting. Bette needs to tell Tina what bother her.
Waiting for the new update than!