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If I Fall: Chapter 10
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Dana was unable to pull herself away, despite the daggers being burned into her back by that Julianna person. But she didn’t care about any of that. She only cared about the way it felt to have Alice back in her arms again. It was like a wave of relief washed over her the second their skin made contact. Like all the hurt and pain and anxiety Dana had been feeling since their breakup had just fallen away to make room for the unadulterated bliss her body was feeling at that moment. It was as if, just for those few seconds, they had forgotten about all their problems and how fucked up things had become, and simply decided to be there in that moment. Unfortunately, reality must have snuck up and slapped Alice in the face because she abruptly broke away from Dana’s grasp to retreat back to Jules’ side.
"Uh, Jules," Alice began, unable to look directly at Dana, "this is our resident celebrity, Dana Fairbanks."
‘Ouch,’ thought Dana. ‘Is that what she considers me? Just her resident celebrity?’
"And Dana, this is Jules, my, uh…my girlfriend," Alice quietly stated, barely inaudible to the naked ear.
Dana noticed Jules light up at the word girlfriend and it made her sick. But for Alice, and for Dana’s own pride and sanity, she smiled politely and extended her hand to Jules.
"Very nice to finally put a face with the voice," Dana relayed.
Alice, who was watching the meeting between her ex and new girlfriend with a close eye, was immediately puzzled about Dana’s previous statement and questioned her about what she meant.
"Oh shit, here we go," Shane muttered in Carmen’s ear.
"Oh it’s nothing, Al. I just happened to be listening that day when you two met. Or, well, the day that Jules called into The Chart to talk about those little words you’re no longer saying."
Alice couldn’t believe that Dana still listened to her radio show, and that she actually had the balls to mention Alice’s Dana-filled on-air rants. But mostly Alice couldn’t seem to figure out why Dana would even care enough to admit to either one.
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Bradshaw approves highly of this chapter :D I’m agreeing with muted about that hug, if danish think they can have a platonic friendship I think they are madly mistaken, Jules is gonna get his heart broken, yes I put his on purpose because I still believe he’s hiding a penis in there somewhere, that’s why he and Alice haven’t had sex, he doesn’t want his secret revealed :P Am i right? This was a cliffhanger, I really wanna know what Alice and Dana say to each other now lady, bad you for making me needy! However it could go terribly wrong and they end up arguing, or will they actually communicate and tell each other what’s going on? Will Jules catch them? PPS so I can let out a sigh of relief when I read a glimmer of hope for danish :)
I’m feeling awfully needy too. I didn’t even think about them possibly having an argument – but things seem to spiral out of control quickly with our beloved danish. Jules seems so good for Alice, but her unfinished business with Dana is going to leave her in the cold eventually. I like how Jules reacted to Dana. She’s not going to let Alice go without a fight, but Alice’s heart is elsewhere. Imagine if Lara was at the party. She wouldn’t have appreciated that not so little hug. Maybe Jules and Lara can get together.I was psyched to see that you updated so quickly, but I was tempted to delay reading because with your busy schedule – who knows when you’ll have time to update again. You aren’t too overworked right now, are you? lol
Great chapter as always. You portray and develop the characters so perfectly. I can’t wait to see how this story unfolds and hopefully it will be a looong happy one :P Thansk for such great writing. Post soon!
ah man – you’re gonna leave it there. well ok – more to look forward to in the next post. thanks. that was cute.
this is such a great story. you’ve got alice down to a T! i love it. i’m feeling sorry for dana,and nervous for alice and jules. can’t wait to see what happens next.
LOL @ Alice kissing Jules’ eyelid on the first date. No matter how Jules tries to mark her territory, though, I have this distinct feeling that she’s going to be left out in the cold… there’s too much left undone between Al and Dana for her to be able to stop it. Liked the chapter a lot, swiss, post soon!
I loved the tension bewteen Alice and Dana. The talk can go either way (and is probably more likely to end in an argument), but as long they have chemistry I’m fine with it. :)
This is a great I can’t wait for more
The Eternal Hug, eh? Nice. And Jealous Jules is pretty awesome, too. I feel bad for her though, it’s so obvious that Dana and Alice are nowhere close to being over each other. And I’m with you, the new season is making me adore Helacious times a thousand. I just hope the show writers realize what a good thing it’d be. Knowing them, though, we’ll have to depend on fanfic. Anyway: Danish good.
“Pain in the ass, Yoda is,” – that made me smile. Can’t wait to see what happens next
Lovely thank you. PPS