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If I Fall: Chapter 12
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Just as Dana was about to scold herself for taking these liberties with the hug, she swore she heard a small sigh escape Alice’s lips. And Dana wondered if it was at all possible that Alice was enjoying this as much as Dana was. Although unfortunately, Alice must have been asking herself the same thing as she abruptly pulled out of Dana’s arms, and put a safe distance between them.
"Well, Jules is out there waiting for me, so…"
"Yeah. I guess you better be going."
"I guess…well, goodnight Dana." And with one last lingering look, Alice turned her back to the athlete and walked out the front door.
"Goodnight Alice. Happy Birthday."
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Back at Alice’s
Jules used the time Alice spent changing out of her dress in the bedroom to uncork a bottle of chilled champagne and fill the room with scented candles, hoping to make their night as memorable as possible. When her girlfriend emerged from the bedroom, she found Jules sitting cross-legged on the sofa pouring two glasses of champagne, and looking unbelievably sexy while doing it.
"What’s all this?" Alice inquired as she took in the scene and made her way over to the sofa.
"Part of your birthday present."
"Only part, huh?" she chided while accepting a champagne glass from Jules.
The blonde raised her glass and waited for Alice to follow suit. "To the birthday girl. I hope this is just the first of many that I get to spend with you."
Alice smiled nervously and averted her eyes as she let Jules’ words sink in. While she appreciated the sentiment, she wasn’t exactly ready to commit to spending the next year with Jules, let alone one of many.
"So…," Jules neared closer, taking the glass out of Alice’s hand and placing it carefully on the table beside her.
"So…oh!" Alice exclaimed.
"What?"
"Presents!"
Jules stepped even closer. "I sort of had a little something different in mind. Although, it definitely has to do with unwrapping."
"I like the way your mind works, but you can’t expect me to just ignore that wonderful pile of gifts right there calling my name as we speak. Let me just open one. Please! I’ll even let you pick," she encouraged as Jules finally relented and picked up the nearest gift in the pile.
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Nice touch with the gift and the note…sorry to say Jules, but you might as well get to pack’n…Sorry I have been a silent reader, but I had to comment after this chapter…PPS
that was such an awesome update. dana’s note was so beautiful. i was starting to think – how will they ever work this out? but the ending has given me some hope. i feel bad for jules and lara but like gemzo said – you can’t stand in the way of true love. thanks for that.
Poor, poor Jules. I liked the fact that Max and Jenny had a fight. That was cute. But poor Jules… lol
Wow fantastic part! Beautiful note from Dana, I feel a bit sorry for Jules but you can’t stand in the way of true love (i hope!) PPS :)
Okay, you made me cry like three times with this thing. Poor Alice, and poor Jules, and poor Dana. Poor everybody, except not Helena since she’s still rich in this. Ha, the wittiness, it astounds even me. And I’m rambling, but I do indeed heart this story immensely.
With Gemzo on this one. awesome story.
Awww, Dana Dana Dana why did you break up with her hmm? Julian is so patient, he’s like super restrained, must be his man powers. LOL I’m sorry, I can’t resist calling her a he, you write so talented and flawless and I’m not poking fun at all, I’m just so caught up and all aboard the danish train woo woo! Ok I think Bradshaw has to stop writing now and chill out because she seems to have lost the plot. Awesome chapter I swear you make me luv you even more with every chap :D xx
awww. that was soo great. loved the note from Dana. It sounds like things are about to be stirred up a bit. Can’t wait to read on.
That was just great. Dana’s gift to Alice was just perfect.
So close, Jules, yet so very, very far away. I’m sorry for her, but as Gemzo’s said, one can’t stop an irresistible force. Nicely done, and sweet at the end.
I actually like Jules…and I think she would be great for Alice if Dana wasn’t around. But Dana is..so back away Jules. ;) I hope a lot of Alice’s quesions willbe anwered by Dana clarifying her note in person.