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    If I Fall: Chapter 12

    Story written on January 22, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    More of Alice’s birthday party, Jules starts to show some signs of jealousy and Bette tries to help by explaining the love that is danish. A heated debate about Mary Tyler Moore ensues; Dana’s emotions get the best of her, and she somehow effects a private celebration between Alice and Jules.

     

    Dana was startled from her thoughts by the knock on the door and shot right up, dropping the purse sitting on her lap and spilling its contents across the bathroom floor.

     

    "Damn it," she cried out as she knelt down to clean up the mess.

     

    Alice could sort of make out the noise coming from the other side of the door and became curious about what was actually going on in there. So she knocked again.

     

    "Shit," Dana muttered to herself. She quickly gathered up the rest of her belongings, and cleared her throat. "One minute," she called out.

     

    "Dane, it’s me."

     

    Dana was now in full-on panic mode. If anyone else were standing on the other side of that door, Dana could simply wipe her eyes and dodge any questions regarding why she was crying alone in a bathroom. But with Alice…well, she was sure that the writer would take one look at her and know exactly what was going on. Plus, Alice see right through any lie Dana attempted to tell, and Dana was just too upset to formulate a believable excuse for the tears in her eyes.

     

    "Uh, Al," she began shakily before recapturing her voice, "I think there’s a bathroom upstairs too if you really have to go."

     

    "Thanks for the tip Dane, but I actually just wanted to say goodbye to you."

    "You’re leaving already?"

     

    "Yeah, Jules is just packing up all the gifts right now so we can head out."

     

    It took every bit of self-control Dana had to not wince in pain at the thought of Alice leaving the party early to go home with her new girlfriend. And it made her want to cry even harder when she thought about what they’d likely be doing. Especially since opening gifts probably wasn’t first on the list.

     

    "Oh, well okay."

     

    Alice expected Dana to open the door and emerge from the bathroom, so she waited. And waited. But nothing.

    "Hey, Dane?" the writer slowly implored.

     

    "Yeah Al?"

     

    "Can you open the door?"

     

    Dana sighed and splashed cold water on her face before slowly opening the door to reveal red, watery eyes and a pale face dripping with tap water.

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    1. Nice touch with the gift and the note…sorry to say Jules, but you might as well get to pack’n…Sorry I have been a silent reader, but I had to comment after this chapter…PPS

    2. that was such an awesome update. dana’s note was so beautiful. i was starting to think – how will they ever work this out? but the ending has given me some hope. i feel bad for jules and lara but like gemzo said – you can’t stand in the way of true love. thanks for that.

    5. Okay, you made me cry like three times with this thing. Poor Alice, and poor Jules, and poor Dana. Poor everybody, except not Helena since she’s still rich in this. Ha, the wittiness, it astounds even me. And I’m rambling, but I do indeed heart this story immensely.

    7. Awww, Dana Dana Dana why did you break up with her hmm? Julian is so patient, he’s like super restrained, must be his man powers. LOL I’m sorry, I can’t resist calling her a he, you write so talented and flawless and I’m not poking fun at all, I’m just so caught up and all aboard the danish train woo woo! Ok I think Bradshaw has to stop writing now and chill out because she seems to have lost the plot. Awesome chapter I swear you make me luv you even more with every chap :D xx

    10. So close, Jules, yet so very, very far away. I’m sorry for her, but as Gemzo’s said, one can’t stop an irresistible force. Nicely done, and sweet at the end.

    11. I actually like Jules…and I think she would be great for Alice if Dana wasn’t around. But Dana is..so back away Jules. ;) I hope a lot of Alice’s quesions willbe anwered by Dana clarifying her note in person.

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