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    If I Fall: Chapter 12

    Story written on January 22, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    More of Alice’s birthday party, Jules starts to show some signs of jealousy and Bette tries to help by explaining the love that is danish. A heated debate about Mary Tyler Moore ensues; Dana’s emotions get the best of her, and she somehow effects a private celebration between Alice and Jules.

     

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    The party went by without much other drama. Jenny and Max got into a fight, which ended with Max storming off and Jenny flirting shamelessly with one of Alice’s co-workers. Despite the earlier intensity of the evening, Dana was actually having a good time…mostly due to the bottle and a half of wine she’d managed to finish off. But partly because Shane and Carmen wouldn’t let her out of their sight to wander off alone again. The irony wasn’t lost on Dana either. For months Shane had to be mindful of and keep watch over Alice, fearing what the writer would do if left alone too long. And now, it seemed like Dana was the one that needed the looking after.  

     

    As for Alice, she was beginning to feel guilty for the way she caught herself stealing glances at Dana, and she was sure it was just a matter of time before Jules would catch on. The evening was definitely a success, but Alice figured she might as well just quit while she was ahead. She had a beautiful girlfriend who seemed to be completely committed to making her happy, wonderful friends who threw her a kick-ass party, and then there was Dana. And she was glad to be able to count Dana among them. After all, Dana was her friend, right? Still, Alice couldn’t help but recognize that she didn’t share such intense, mind-numbing looks with any one else she considered a friend.

     

    "Hey, you wanna get out of here?" she asked of Jules rather suddenly.

     

    "Wait, can we do that?"

     

    "I’m the birthday girl, I can do whatever the hell I want!"

     

    "Yeah, but…," the singer began somewhat dubiously, "your friends went to all this trouble to throw you a surprise party. You think we can just leave before it’s over?"

     

    "Jules, it’s my party and I’ll leave if I want to!" Alice pouted.

     

    "Well who am I to argue with that? Let’s go. But if your friends ask any questions I’m totally blaming it on you and the fact that you use your ability at being adorable to convince me into just about anything."

     

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    1. Nice touch with the gift and the note…sorry to say Jules, but you might as well get to pack’n…Sorry I have been a silent reader, but I had to comment after this chapter…PPS

    2. that was such an awesome update. dana’s note was so beautiful. i was starting to think – how will they ever work this out? but the ending has given me some hope. i feel bad for jules and lara but like gemzo said – you can’t stand in the way of true love. thanks for that.

    5. Okay, you made me cry like three times with this thing. Poor Alice, and poor Jules, and poor Dana. Poor everybody, except not Helena since she’s still rich in this. Ha, the wittiness, it astounds even me. And I’m rambling, but I do indeed heart this story immensely.

    7. Awww, Dana Dana Dana why did you break up with her hmm? Julian is so patient, he’s like super restrained, must be his man powers. LOL I’m sorry, I can’t resist calling her a he, you write so talented and flawless and I’m not poking fun at all, I’m just so caught up and all aboard the danish train woo woo! Ok I think Bradshaw has to stop writing now and chill out because she seems to have lost the plot. Awesome chapter I swear you make me luv you even more with every chap :D xx

    10. So close, Jules, yet so very, very far away. I’m sorry for her, but as Gemzo’s said, one can’t stop an irresistible force. Nicely done, and sweet at the end.

    11. I actually like Jules…and I think she would be great for Alice if Dana wasn’t around. But Dana is..so back away Jules. ;) I hope a lot of Alice’s quesions willbe anwered by Dana clarifying her note in person.

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