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    If I Fall: Chapter 12

    Story written on January 22, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    More of Alice’s birthday party, Jules starts to show some signs of jealousy and Bette tries to help by explaining the love that is danish. A heated debate about Mary Tyler Moore ensues; Dana’s emotions get the best of her, and she somehow effects a private celebration between Alice and Jules.

     

    "Jen, maybe they had something else in mind for the rest of their night," the stylist encouraged as she took another swig of beer.

     

    "Huh?"

    Alice waited for Jenny to get her head out of the clouds and realize what Shane was alluding to. And sure enough, five seconds later the light seemed to flicker on in the novelist’s head.

     

    "Ohhhh, right. I get it. Something else. Well by all means, get the hell out of here and have a happy birthday!"

     

    "Uh, thanks Jenny," Alice retorted while making sure to give each of her friends a hug goodbye along with a sincere thank you for throwing her what turned out to be a great surprise party.

     

    After Alice made the rounds of saying goodbye and thank you to just about every guest still left there, she made sure to give Helena an even bigger thank you as Jules gathered up the presents and took them out to the car.

     

    "Oh Alice, really. It was no trouble at all. I was just doing my part for your birthday."

     

    "Would you stop being so fucking modest all the time? It was amazing of you to throw me this party, especially to track down and invite just about everyone I know, despite the fact that some of them are complete strangers to you. It was just really cool, Hel. I hope you know how glad I am to have you in my life."

     

    Helena couldn’t suppress the wide grin taking shape across her face as she pulled Alice in for a hug that squeezed nearly all the air out of the writer. "Well you’re my best friend, Alice. And if I can’t do this for you, than who can?" she mumbled into Alice’s shoulder before releasing her and wiping away the tears from her eyes.

     

    "Jesus Christ, Helena. I love you too, but no tears, okay? I can’t take making someone else I care about cry tonight." Helena giggled at this and dabbed her eyes with a cocktail napkin. "Hey, speaking of, do you happen to know where Dana is?"

     

    Helena scanned the kitchen they were standing in and then motioned her head towards the nearest bathroom. "Last time I saw her she was on her way to the loo."

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    1. Nice touch with the gift and the note…sorry to say Jules, but you might as well get to pack’n…Sorry I have been a silent reader, but I had to comment after this chapter…PPS

    2. that was such an awesome update. dana’s note was so beautiful. i was starting to think – how will they ever work this out? but the ending has given me some hope. i feel bad for jules and lara but like gemzo said – you can’t stand in the way of true love. thanks for that.

    5. Okay, you made me cry like three times with this thing. Poor Alice, and poor Jules, and poor Dana. Poor everybody, except not Helena since she’s still rich in this. Ha, the wittiness, it astounds even me. And I’m rambling, but I do indeed heart this story immensely.

    7. Awww, Dana Dana Dana why did you break up with her hmm? Julian is so patient, he’s like super restrained, must be his man powers. LOL I’m sorry, I can’t resist calling her a he, you write so talented and flawless and I’m not poking fun at all, I’m just so caught up and all aboard the danish train woo woo! Ok I think Bradshaw has to stop writing now and chill out because she seems to have lost the plot. Awesome chapter I swear you make me luv you even more with every chap :D xx

    10. So close, Jules, yet so very, very far away. I’m sorry for her, but as Gemzo’s said, one can’t stop an irresistible force. Nicely done, and sweet at the end.

    11. I actually like Jules…and I think she would be great for Alice if Dana wasn’t around. But Dana is..so back away Jules. ;) I hope a lot of Alice’s quesions willbe anwered by Dana clarifying her note in person.

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