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    If I Fall: Chapter 13

    Story written on February 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    The morning after; Dana & Alice are having a gay old time at The Planet until St. Jules puts an end to it

    Alice just smiled to herself and turned her attention to the coffee in front of her. "Eh, nothing," she waived her off. "Just thinking."

     

    Dana decided not to push Alice to get more specific, so she blurted out the first "safe" topic that popped into her head. "So Jules is nice."

     

    ‘Fuck, Dana. Why the hell would you bring her up?’ the athlete scolded herself.

     

    Alice was a bit caught off guard by the statement, wondering what Dana was getting at. "Oh thanks. Yeah, she is."

     

    "Almost to the point of saint hood," the athlete mumbled under her breath without thinking.

     

    "Huh?"

     

    "Nothing," Dana quickly shot back, "so I hope you had a nice time last night after you left." The words were out of her mouth before she realized just what she was alluding to. It wasn’t as if she tried to purposely bring up the private time Alice and Jules had shared, but she was too busy fumbling for anything to detract Alice’s attention away from her previous insult, she hadn’t realized what she just said. Of course before they dated, that topic would completely be fair game. But now, it fell into the very gray area of things they probably weren’t ready to share with each other.

     

    Alice took a deep breath when she realized what Dana meant, wondering just how to go about answering that question. "Look Dane, I know were trying to work on the friend thing and stuff, but do you really think were ready to be talking about that?"

     

    "Sorry."

     

    "No, I mean, I’m fine with it. I just…," Alice broke off unsure of how to continue.

     

    "What?" Dana asked, praying that she would go on.

     

    "Well, I don’t know. I don’t mind telling you stuff. It actually makes me happy that we’re back to that place again, you know? I’m just thinking…I guess my imagination is worse than any reality you can throw at me."

     

    "W-what do you mean?"

    "Okay, it’s like…I’ve accepted that Lara’s your girlfriend now, and I can figure out what that entails. And I admit in the beginning the thought of you being with someone else made me want to find the nearest bridge and—"

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    1. Okay, first? “Top of the muffin…TO YOU!!!” Sorry, I had to. Second: I love your little homage to Ally’s Julian conjecture. Awesome. Third…nothing specific, just that you’re fucking amazing at this and I heart the story more every time you update. I love the slow buildup thing you have going for Danish, and making Jules human and good for Alice instead of a jerkbot who makes it logical for her to run back to Dana. Love love love this! And take as much time as you need between updates, you’ve got pelnty of people who’ll read and enjoy this no matter how long you make us wait.

    3. Quantity and quality … you’re amazing!!! I chuckled when I read the part about Dana not returning Lara’s phone calls. I hate to say it, but I see so many of my less than direct qualities in her. lol I had forgotten that De_Leish said Jules was a guy – too funny! Your story is fantastic. I caught the part you added. It fit in perfectly. Thanks for the update!

    4. Damn I freakin’ love this story. I haven’t had much of a chance to read fanfic lately, so I just read the last two updates now. Can’t wait to see what you have planned next.

    5. Finally got caught up this morning…and am still very much enjoying this. You’re doing such a great job of capturing the awkwardness of trying to pretend nothing’s there while they’re trying to recapture their comfort zone. Looking forward to more! PPS

    6. On one hand I could strangle Dana for playing with Alice’s emotions like that. On the other hand…if it would result in a positive Danish outcome I’m all for encouraging Dana on what she is doing (although she doesn’t even know herself waht she exactly is doing ;)). Looking forward to the next chapter!

    7. Lameoid I am – I’ve just discovered your story – Yay! for me – it’s wonderful. Jules sort of scares me – anyone that immaculate must be borderline wacky mcnutty. I am so anticipating the next chapter.

    8. Ok I LMFAO when the penis convo was brought up! I’m so happy Dana agrees with me :D I luv ya for that, I truly do, it’s made my night. In fact this whole post was amazing, the depth and realism you write about their situation is so excellent. PPS

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