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If I Fall: Chapter 13
"Shut up, you know what I mean," she retorted with a smirk, "besides, it’s not like we wanted to sleep together for the entire seven years before we actually did it."
"Uh, speak for yourself," the athlete quietly admitted.
"Wait, what?"
"Come on, you know I wanted to…well, you know."
"No actually, I don’t," Alice replied, finding her own enjoyment in the fact that Dana was having trouble saying what she wanted to say.
"That I wanted to jump your bones from like, the first moment we met," she whispered.
Alice raised her eyebrows at this. "Oh I’m sorry, I guess I was too busy focusing on the fact that you threatened to get me fired to really notice all your flirting."
"Fair enough…But seriously Al, I can’t believe you and Jules haven’t…you know."
"Fucked, Dane? You still can’t say it, can you?"
"Whatever."
"Why is it such a big deal anyway, we’ve only been together a few weeks."
"Well I don’t know, you seem to think she’s perfect."
"First of all, no one’s perfect. And even if she’s as close to it as humanly possible, so what?"
"So! Al, how do you know she’s not like, hiding a penis under there or something?"
"Shut the fuck up. She’s not a guy."
"No, I’m serious! There’s this whole other side to her you’ve yet to see," Dana warned mockingly.
"Dana, Jules is short for Julianna, not Julian, okay? I think I’d know if I was dating a tranny."
"She is quite striking you know," she teased, trying her best to bite back the smirk forming across her lips, but to no avail. Alice, with her mouth agape feigning anger, took a piece of her scone and flung it mercilessly at the athlete. Fortunately, she had shitty aim and Dana stuck her tongue out as soon as the food flew directly over her left shoulder.
"Fuck you, Fairbanks," Alice shot back.
"I’d let you, but I might not be your type anymore," she laughed. And it was quite infectious once Alice let go of her frustration and reluctantly joined in.
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(36 votes, average: 3.33 out of 5)
Okay, first? “Top of the muffin…TO YOU!!!” Sorry, I had to. Second: I love your little homage to Ally’s Julian conjecture. Awesome. Third…nothing specific, just that you’re fucking amazing at this and I heart the story more every time you update. I love the slow buildup thing you have going for Danish, and making Jules human and good for Alice instead of a jerkbot who makes it logical for her to run back to Dana. Love love love this! And take as much time as you need between updates, you’ve got pelnty of people who’ll read and enjoy this no matter how long you make us wait.
I LOVE this story
Quantity and quality … you’re amazing!!! I chuckled when I read the part about Dana not returning Lara’s phone calls. I hate to say it, but I see so many of my less than direct qualities in her. lol I had forgotten that De_Leish said Jules was a guy – too funny! Your story is fantastic. I caught the part you added. It fit in perfectly. Thanks for the update!
Damn I freakin’ love this story. I haven’t had much of a chance to read fanfic lately, so I just read the last two updates now. Can’t wait to see what you have planned next.
Finally got caught up this morning…and am still very much enjoying this. You’re doing such a great job of capturing the awkwardness of trying to pretend nothing’s there while they’re trying to recapture their comfort zone. Looking forward to more! PPS
On one hand I could strangle Dana for playing with Alice’s emotions like that. On the other hand…if it would result in a positive Danish outcome I’m all for encouraging Dana on what she is doing (although she doesn’t even know herself waht she exactly is doing ;)). Looking forward to the next chapter!
Lameoid I am – I’ve just discovered your story – Yay! for me – it’s wonderful. Jules sort of scares me – anyone that immaculate must be borderline wacky mcnutty. I am so anticipating the next chapter.
Ok I LMFAO when the penis convo was brought up! I’m so happy Dana agrees with me :D I luv ya for that, I truly do, it’s made my night. In fact this whole post was amazing, the depth and realism you write about their situation is so excellent. PPS