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    If I Fall: Chapter 13

    Story written on February 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    The morning after; Dana & Alice are having a gay old time at The Planet until St. Jules puts an end to it

     

    "And now?"

     

    "And now like I said, I’m okay with it. I really just want you to be happy, Dane. And if that means being with Lara, or anyone else, than I’m just happy for you."

     

    "Wow," Dana relented, somewhat amazed at Alice’s selfless attitude.

     

    "What?" the writer asked, suddenly alarmed that she had said too much.

     

    "Nothing, I just…I dont know, I guess I didn’t realize how far you’ve come with all this."

     

    "Yeah…I guess I have."

     

    "Plus, I’m sure sleeping with someone else would make it easier to hear about Lara and I, huh?"

     

    "Uh, I guess…," Alice shrugged and the athlete picked up on the indefiniteness of her answer immediately

     

    "Wait a second, you mean…," she hastily questioned, unable to conceal the hopefulness in her voice.

     

    "What?"

     

    "You and Jules haven’t…well, you know." Dana motioned with her hands hoping to urge the writer on, but Alice remained silent for a few seconds.

     

    "I never said that. But so what if we haven’t?"

     

    "Nothing, I’m just…surprised, that’s all," Dana explained, shaking her head in disbelief.

     

    "And why’s that?" she questioned, feeling a bit defensive.

    "Cause I know you."

     

    She couldn’t put her finger on it, but her mild defensiveness to Dana’s reaction had now effortlessly transformed into full-on attack mode. And the fact that Dana was smiling like an idiot about Alice’s recent lack of sex was making the writer more than a little pissed off. "Listen Dane, just because you and I jumped into bed while you were still in another relationship doesn’t mean I always operate that quickly. I’m trying to take this one slow."

     

    "Right, cause us waiting seven years was just way too fast," Dana facetiously rejoined.

     

    Alice considered this for a moment and couldn’t deny that at the time she and Dana finally did become intimate, it had seemed like it had taken them a lifetime to get there. Especially when considering that she’d imagined what it would be like to make love to Dana for years prior to that. But she wasn’t exactly ready to admit any of this to Dana, who was enjoying this all way too much for Alice’s liking right now.

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    1. Okay, first? “Top of the muffin…TO YOU!!!” Sorry, I had to. Second: I love your little homage to Ally’s Julian conjecture. Awesome. Third…nothing specific, just that you’re fucking amazing at this and I heart the story more every time you update. I love the slow buildup thing you have going for Danish, and making Jules human and good for Alice instead of a jerkbot who makes it logical for her to run back to Dana. Love love love this! And take as much time as you need between updates, you’ve got pelnty of people who’ll read and enjoy this no matter how long you make us wait.

    3. Quantity and quality … you’re amazing!!! I chuckled when I read the part about Dana not returning Lara’s phone calls. I hate to say it, but I see so many of my less than direct qualities in her. lol I had forgotten that De_Leish said Jules was a guy – too funny! Your story is fantastic. I caught the part you added. It fit in perfectly. Thanks for the update!

    4. Damn I freakin’ love this story. I haven’t had much of a chance to read fanfic lately, so I just read the last two updates now. Can’t wait to see what you have planned next.

    5. Finally got caught up this morning…and am still very much enjoying this. You’re doing such a great job of capturing the awkwardness of trying to pretend nothing’s there while they’re trying to recapture their comfort zone. Looking forward to more! PPS

    6. On one hand I could strangle Dana for playing with Alice’s emotions like that. On the other hand…if it would result in a positive Danish outcome I’m all for encouraging Dana on what she is doing (although she doesn’t even know herself waht she exactly is doing ;)). Looking forward to the next chapter!

    7. Lameoid I am – I’ve just discovered your story – Yay! for me – it’s wonderful. Jules sort of scares me – anyone that immaculate must be borderline wacky mcnutty. I am so anticipating the next chapter.

    8. Ok I LMFAO when the penis convo was brought up! I’m so happy Dana agrees with me :D I luv ya for that, I truly do, it’s made my night. In fact this whole post was amazing, the depth and realism you write about their situation is so excellent. PPS

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