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    If I Fall: Chapter 13

    Story written on February 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    The morning after; Dana & Alice are having a gay old time at The Planet until St. Jules puts an end to it

     

    However, it wasn’t really the looks emanating from Dana that worried her most. No, she could understand how the athlete must be regretting her decision to let go of Alice, especially now that the writer was moving on. Jules could surely comprehend how anyone could fall in love with Alice, it was just so God damn easy to do. But what troubled her more deeply, more than even words could relay, was the way that Alice looked at Dana back. What started as a look of sadness mixed with regret, had appeared to turn into one of desire mixed with elation over the past month. Could Alice really have forgotten all the pain this woman put her through? Was she still in love with Dana? Was Jules just some temporary distraction until Alice forgave Dana completely and welcomed her back with open arms? Was she just setting herself up for heartache?

     

    She knew that she was probably over-thinking this whole situation, and maybe the look of relief and peace in Alice was just because she had her best friend back. Either way, Jules vowed to not give up so easily. Even if her new relationship with Alice was doomed for failure, she wasn’t going down without a fight.

     

    So she continued to make her way over to Alice and Dana, who both still hadn’t noticed her standing less than three feet away. Upon finally reaching her destination, she cleared her throat and waited for the laughter to die out.  

     

    Alice immediately ceased laughing and stood up to greet her girlfriend. "Hey!" Dana followed Alice with her eyes and Jules noticed the corners of the brunette’s mouth turning downward.

     

    "Am I interrupting something?" the singer inquired, eyes darting back and forth from Alice to Dana.

     

    In response Alice just smiled and gave her a quick peck on the cheek. "What? Of course you’re not interrupting. Dane and I were just…," Alice trailed off as she quickly glanced at Dana, who met her glance and then let her eyes wander to focus directly on the fly of Jules’ pants. Alice shot her a scowling look as Dana just shrugged and smiled politely up at Jules. "Dane and I were just uh…talking about transvestites. You know, typical coffee talk."

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    1. Okay, first? “Top of the muffin…TO YOU!!!” Sorry, I had to. Second: I love your little homage to Ally’s Julian conjecture. Awesome. Third…nothing specific, just that you’re fucking amazing at this and I heart the story more every time you update. I love the slow buildup thing you have going for Danish, and making Jules human and good for Alice instead of a jerkbot who makes it logical for her to run back to Dana. Love love love this! And take as much time as you need between updates, you’ve got pelnty of people who’ll read and enjoy this no matter how long you make us wait.

    3. Quantity and quality … you’re amazing!!! I chuckled when I read the part about Dana not returning Lara’s phone calls. I hate to say it, but I see so many of my less than direct qualities in her. lol I had forgotten that De_Leish said Jules was a guy – too funny! Your story is fantastic. I caught the part you added. It fit in perfectly. Thanks for the update!

    4. Damn I freakin’ love this story. I haven’t had much of a chance to read fanfic lately, so I just read the last two updates now. Can’t wait to see what you have planned next.

    5. Finally got caught up this morning…and am still very much enjoying this. You’re doing such a great job of capturing the awkwardness of trying to pretend nothing’s there while they’re trying to recapture their comfort zone. Looking forward to more! PPS

    6. On one hand I could strangle Dana for playing with Alice’s emotions like that. On the other hand…if it would result in a positive Danish outcome I’m all for encouraging Dana on what she is doing (although she doesn’t even know herself waht she exactly is doing ;)). Looking forward to the next chapter!

    7. Lameoid I am – I’ve just discovered your story – Yay! for me – it’s wonderful. Jules sort of scares me – anyone that immaculate must be borderline wacky mcnutty. I am so anticipating the next chapter.

    8. Ok I LMFAO when the penis convo was brought up! I’m so happy Dana agrees with me :D I luv ya for that, I truly do, it’s made my night. In fact this whole post was amazing, the depth and realism you write about their situation is so excellent. PPS

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