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    If I Fall: Chapter 13

    Story written on February 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    The morning after; Dana & Alice are having a gay old time at The Planet until St. Jules puts an end to it

     

    The cacophony created by their shared laughter could be heard throughout The Planet, and this is exactly the noise that Jules was greeted with as she made her way through the main entrance. As she spotted her girlfriend and made her way over to the table, neither Alice nor Dana noticed her impending presence. So they continued to giggle like school girls and this was precisely when Jules was almost stopped in her tracks after observing the look on Alice’s face. It was one she’d never seen before, one she was unable to register or assign to a particular cause, until, of course, she looked to the athlete sitting across the table.  

     

    One thing Jules had learned about Alice over the past month was that although seemingly carefree and light-hearted on the outside, the writer carried with her a tremendous burden. And while she seemed happier than she had been, there was still this thing, way too heavy for Jules to lift herself, that was blocking Alice’s heart. And this was only recognizable to those who really knew the writer these past months, since it wasn’t as markedly prevalent before the breakup. Jules regarded it as a black cloud that loomed over Alice’s heart, creating an undeniable sense of tension and sadness with every word she spoke.

     

    But now as Jules watched Alice staring into Dana’s eyes and echoing the laughter she heard, it seemed as if that weight had been lifted. That Alice’s carefree demeanor had nothing turbulent or muddled under the surface to make it seem like her smile was just a guise. In that exact moment with Dana, her happiness seemed genuine and nearly palpable. It made Jules question whether or not she should leave Alice alone for good and get the hell out of there before she was spotted. And on the other hand, she wanted to stay and fight for Alice, making known to Dana and anyone else who got in the way that Alice was her girlfriend and hers alone. Sure, it was inevitable that Dana would be a part of Alice’s life, and Jules was trying her best to come to terms with that on her own. But she’d have to be blind to not see the way Dana looked at Alice, and that intense gaze of yearning made her want scream.

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    1. Okay, first? “Top of the muffin…TO YOU!!!” Sorry, I had to. Second: I love your little homage to Ally’s Julian conjecture. Awesome. Third…nothing specific, just that you’re fucking amazing at this and I heart the story more every time you update. I love the slow buildup thing you have going for Danish, and making Jules human and good for Alice instead of a jerkbot who makes it logical for her to run back to Dana. Love love love this! And take as much time as you need between updates, you’ve got pelnty of people who’ll read and enjoy this no matter how long you make us wait.

    3. Quantity and quality … you’re amazing!!! I chuckled when I read the part about Dana not returning Lara’s phone calls. I hate to say it, but I see so many of my less than direct qualities in her. lol I had forgotten that De_Leish said Jules was a guy – too funny! Your story is fantastic. I caught the part you added. It fit in perfectly. Thanks for the update!

    4. Damn I freakin’ love this story. I haven’t had much of a chance to read fanfic lately, so I just read the last two updates now. Can’t wait to see what you have planned next.

    5. Finally got caught up this morning…and am still very much enjoying this. You’re doing such a great job of capturing the awkwardness of trying to pretend nothing’s there while they’re trying to recapture their comfort zone. Looking forward to more! PPS

    6. On one hand I could strangle Dana for playing with Alice’s emotions like that. On the other hand…if it would result in a positive Danish outcome I’m all for encouraging Dana on what she is doing (although she doesn’t even know herself waht she exactly is doing ;)). Looking forward to the next chapter!

    7. Lameoid I am – I’ve just discovered your story – Yay! for me – it’s wonderful. Jules sort of scares me – anyone that immaculate must be borderline wacky mcnutty. I am so anticipating the next chapter.

    8. Ok I LMFAO when the penis convo was brought up! I’m so happy Dana agrees with me :D I luv ya for that, I truly do, it’s made my night. In fact this whole post was amazing, the depth and realism you write about their situation is so excellent. PPS

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