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    If I Fall: Chapter 13

    Story written on February 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    The morning after; Dana & Alice are having a gay old time at The Planet until St. Jules puts an end to it

     

    True, Dana didn’t’ know just how this would all play out. She was willing to admit, to herself at least, that she never stopped loving Alice, although that love was mistakenly overshadowed by the problems they were dealing with at the time of the breakup. Alice’s insecurities and self-professed dependency issues made it difficult for even Dana herself to believe in their love. And while the writer did make it nearly impossible for anyone to love her during that time, Dana could acknowledge that her inability to communicate and let anyone in made things that much worse. On top of that, when the going got tough, Dana would get going…fast. She’d become a pro at shirking away from her true feelings in order to make things easier and more comfortable for herself in the short-run. Never once did she consider how much harder this made things in the long-run. Just about anyone would be frustrated after being told, from the person you cared for most in this world, that they refused to believe your confessions of true love no matter how strongly you professed them. And that was basically what Alice construed to Dana. No matter what the athlete did or said, it just wasn’t enough. And Dana, being the less than strong-willed person she was, didn’t know what else to do but give up on the relationship and run the other way.

     

    But now, for the very first time in her life, she forced herself to come to terms with the mistakes she made and resolve to figure out a way to fix them. If not for herself, to finally let herself go after the life she wanted, but for Alice. She knew Alice seemed happy now, happier than she had been towards the end of their own relationship. But Dana was sure Alice still felt something for her. She was sure that Alice had worked through the pain Dana induced on her by forcing herself to move on and trying to suppress any feelings of love she still felt towards the athlete, and this just wasn’t sitting well with the athlete. Dana was convinced now that it was her job to make Alice acknowledge those feelings and go with them.

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    1. Okay, first? “Top of the muffin…TO YOU!!!” Sorry, I had to. Second: I love your little homage to Ally’s Julian conjecture. Awesome. Third…nothing specific, just that you’re fucking amazing at this and I heart the story more every time you update. I love the slow buildup thing you have going for Danish, and making Jules human and good for Alice instead of a jerkbot who makes it logical for her to run back to Dana. Love love love this! And take as much time as you need between updates, you’ve got pelnty of people who’ll read and enjoy this no matter how long you make us wait.

    3. Quantity and quality … you’re amazing!!! I chuckled when I read the part about Dana not returning Lara’s phone calls. I hate to say it, but I see so many of my less than direct qualities in her. lol I had forgotten that De_Leish said Jules was a guy – too funny! Your story is fantastic. I caught the part you added. It fit in perfectly. Thanks for the update!

    4. Damn I freakin’ love this story. I haven’t had much of a chance to read fanfic lately, so I just read the last two updates now. Can’t wait to see what you have planned next.

    5. Finally got caught up this morning…and am still very much enjoying this. You’re doing such a great job of capturing the awkwardness of trying to pretend nothing’s there while they’re trying to recapture their comfort zone. Looking forward to more! PPS

    6. On one hand I could strangle Dana for playing with Alice’s emotions like that. On the other hand…if it would result in a positive Danish outcome I’m all for encouraging Dana on what she is doing (although she doesn’t even know herself waht she exactly is doing ;)). Looking forward to the next chapter!

    7. Lameoid I am – I’ve just discovered your story – Yay! for me – it’s wonderful. Jules sort of scares me – anyone that immaculate must be borderline wacky mcnutty. I am so anticipating the next chapter.

    8. Ok I LMFAO when the penis convo was brought up! I’m so happy Dana agrees with me :D I luv ya for that, I truly do, it’s made my night. In fact this whole post was amazing, the depth and realism you write about their situation is so excellent. PPS

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