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If I Fall: Chapter 15
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"You know what, Lara," Dana stuttered and turned her attention back to the chef, "maybe I do have a few minutes to spare. I’m gonna go sit down, just let me know when my shake is done."
Lara’s eyes followed Dana over to the table and before she could even wonder what was responsible for the athlete’s sudden change of heart, she noticed the difference right away— Alice. Since the night of Alice’s party, Dana had been acting inexplicably distant, like her body was there, but her mind was just about anywhere else. And the emotional wall that Lara thought she had broken through with Dana seemed to be newly rebuilt and higher than ever. And yet the only noticeable difference that Lara could conclude was that Dana and Alice had renewed their "friendship". True, the two weren’t nearly as close as they once were, and the tension between them was still palpable, but Alice had taken the first steps to forgiving Dana and it seemed as if the latter was falling all over herself to get back in former’s good graces. Which Lara didn’t completely understand because Alice was the one that had stalked and spied on Dana for months. Alice was the one that seemed to initially push Dana away in the first place. It was Alice who should be trying to win back Dana’s trust and friendship, at least in Lara’s opinion. Lara also supposed she was sort of biased in this area and hoped that no matter what happened, they could all co-exist together. Except, she had now started noticing this change in Dana and as much as she hated to admit it, it was the same change she noticed when Dana was dating Alice and Lara had come back into the picture. ‘Stop doing this to yourself,’ Lara mentally scolded. ‘Dana is with me, she left Alice because it didn’t work. They’re just friends, that’s all.’ But try as she might, she was still finding it hard to believe that friendship was the only thing left between the two.
"Hey guys!" Dana mustered up as much cheer as she could and sat down in the empty chair across from Alice.
"Hey everyone, it’s our very own Amelie Mauresmo!" Alice chided with a bright smile.
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This is so good. PPS.
Just pure gold. Probably one of the best danish stories ever. PPS!!!
I love the excruciating wait your giving us with these two, the tension really is thick and I think you portray them so perfectly. Bradshaw is in awe! xx
Welcome back – you have grabbed my interest and enthusiasm for this story once again – pps.
uh – that did not end like i expected it to – but i loved it none the less. you have the characters down so well. when are they going to wise up. first things first dana needs to get rid of lara.
I’m so happy that you updated this story I just love it
great update!loving the tension between those two.
Oh ive been waiting for so long..eee that was great and totally agree one of the best danish i’ve ever read thank you!!!! :)
i think this is my first time posting, but I have been reading from the beggining, loving this story…Dana needs to break it off with Lara…Love the Danish tension, good stuff…PPS
I have to admit, seeing that you posted made me squee with joy. I’m so glad you haven’t given up on this, since I absolutely love it. Oh yeah, and PPS and all that jazz.
yay!! you’re back. I love how your stories are always so emotionally saturated…PPS!
Yeah I always look forward to you posting the next chapter of this story and so far you have never let me down. PPS
This story is wonderfully told. I can see them and hear them perfectly. You write a very good romance and capture both of their perspectives beautifully. I love this ‘saga’… : )