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If I Fall: Chapter 17
Slowly, but with an urgency Alice had no idea the blonde was capable of, they fumbled through the hallway, and eventually into the bedroom, never once breaking the contact they shared. Once inside, giddy with the anticipation of what was to come, Alice began unbuttoning Jules’ shirt. Leisurely, and with exacting precision one unnecessary button at a time, Jules could hardly stand the tension. After her shirt and pants were in a pile on the floor, she seductively crawled onto the bed as Alice stood there watching in complete exasperation. She had no clue how this woman could actually get hotter with each passing day, but it was somehow possible with Jules. Alice smiled at the thought, realizing for the first time in awhile just how lucky she was.
After her body began yearning for the much needed contact once more, she walked over to the edge of the bed and began to lower herself over Jules, who now laid on her back sporting only her bra and panties.
"You’re beautiful," Alice whispered. And just as she leaned in for a kiss, the romantic mood was abruptly shattered by the blaring of her cell phone. She hesitated for a moment, and looked at Jules, who was waiting expectantly for her to make a move one way or the other. "Ignore it," Alice demanded, and leaned in to capture the blonde’s lips once more.
But just when they thought they’d successfully avoided the interruption, her cell phone rang once again in its own obnoxious manner. "Fuck," Alice yelled.
"Hey," Jules reached up and cupped Alice’s face. "Just ignore it. Eventually they’ll stop, right?"
Alice smiled affectionately and nodded in agreement. "Right."
But once again, the cell phone rang. And it rang and rang some more. And the women were both so determined to keep ignoring it, that they barely noticed when Alice’s apartment phone began to ring as well. Alice sighed dejectedly as she pecked Jules on the cheek and whispered an apology to her.
"Motherfucker!" Jules muttered, barely audible to Alice’s ears as the writer rolled over to grab the phone off her nightstand.
"Whoever this is, I’m going to kill. Unless they’re calling to say they’re dead already," Alice lamented as she picked up the phone and pressed it to her ear. "What?"
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(46 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
awesome. i am so excited to see what happens next.
Oh man my heart is breakin here, this was a great chapter!!, I hope Dana doesn’t give up though, thanks for the post!!
Fantastic chapter – Dana can’t give up on Alice – what a pity she was so stoned – as things might have been a bit different. Can’t wait to see what comes next.
OMG…that was intense. I was holding my breath untill the end of this chapter! What is their next move? What will Alice tell Jules? And how will ‘ sober’ Dana act around Alice the next time they see each other?
Okay, I haven’t even read past the first page yet, but I have to comment and say that I’m a little freaked out. After work this morning I decided to have a Tarantino marathon, and right before I checked the main page I’d just finished watching Pulp Fiction. Needless to say, I’m feeling a little spooked as well as amused by the word “motherfucker” in this. Okay, I’m gonna go read the rest and leave more feedback later. Ta.
Okay, I read it and have returned to comment again. You’re a fucking heartbreaker, you know that?? I’m seriously crying over here. Poor Dana, poor Alice, and even poor Jules, but she’s a bad mother fucker so she’ll get over it. Well, if there’s anything to get over, which there had better be because Alice and Dana need to be together.
First things first it happened at 4am…that was magical, next I am so glad that Dana actually told Alice how she feels but for some reason I don’t think Jules is just going to sit back and let it Dana and Alice happen. This chapter would have to have an 11/10 if I could do that. Fantastic PPS.
Wow! As much as my heart breaks for Dana, I understand Alice’s need to protect herself. Jules is a saint and all, but I wonder how she will react when Alice finally finds her. She gets it. Not only does Dana belong to Alice, (I loved that line), but Alice belongs to Dana too!Go Tennessee!
Wow that was just perfect I can’t wait to see wat happens next
Ouch you are killing me here. PPS. You can’t leave us hanging like that, not nice.
I think we know the real reason Alice and Jules haven’t slept together yet *nudge nudge* , so when he and Alice eventually have the talk about ‘Dana’ will he admit his secret? hehe ok I love this, I truly do, I want it to never end. :) xx
damn! poor dana :S she finally opens to alice but guess it was too late :( i just want jules to disappear…:P well not really but frak! i just want danish together :( can’t wait for your next chapter :D
fanfrikintastic!!!!!
And so it begins…Love this…you have definately captured Danish Angst…Dana needs to really step it up! Great Chapter! PPS!
simply put – well done!
that was great I just hope that dana will keep fighting for alice they so belong together please post soon I love it great update
wow so good loved it..great work:)