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    If I Fall: Chapter 17

    Story written on April 3, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Alice & Dana…oh, just read it, I don’t want to ruin the suspense.

     

    "Uh, is this Alice?" asked the unidentifiable voice on the other end.

     

    "Depends who this is?"

     

    "This is Gina from Milk."

     

    "The bartender?" Alice asked, her frustration transforming into confusion.

     

    "Yeah. I have a, uh…friend of yours here. She’s pretty banged up right now and even though I cut off her tequila intake twenty minutes ago, she’s still sort of difficult to handle."

     

    "A friend…what friend?"

     

    "She says her name is Dana."

     

    "Motherfucker," Alice grumbled as she rolled her eyes.

     

    "Excuse me?"

     

    "Oh, no, nothing. Forget it."

     

    "Well uh, I wouldn’t have called you, but this was the number she insisted on giving me. She keeps saying she belongs to you."

     

    "Is that so?" Alice scoffed. "Listen, Gina, I appreciate you calling and I’m sorry she’s become such a handful. I know how she gets when she drinks tequila…it’s like giving a gremlin water. But maybe, can you just call her a cab and send her home? I’m sort of in the middle of something." She glanced back at Jules, who was now sitting on the edge of the bed with an incredibly impatient look on her face.  

     

    "Yeah, well we’re way past that Alice. I tried calling her a cab ten minutes ago, but she refused to tell me where she lived. I’m not sure if she’s so drunk that she can’t remember her own address, or if she’s so drunk she doesn’t want to remember, but the cab driver refused to go anywhere without a destination."

     

    Alice squeezed her eyes and pinched the bridge of her nose in frustration. Dana was doing this on purpose, she had to be. She didn’t care how drunk the athlete was, she was in no mood to play these games right now. Not when there was a hot blonde half-naked on her bed. She shook her head in exasperated defeat and told Gina to sit tight, she’d be there in ten minutes.

     

    After she put the phone down she turned back to Jules with every intention of explaining, but the blonde was much more intuitive than Alice gave her credit for and simply said Dana’s name aloud before Alice could get a word out edgewise.

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    3. Fantastic chapter – Dana can’t give up on Alice – what a pity she was so stoned – as things might have been a bit different. Can’t wait to see what comes next.

    4. OMG…that was intense. I was holding my breath untill the end of this chapter! What is their next move? What will Alice tell Jules? And how will ‘ sober’ Dana act around Alice the next time they see each other?

    5. Okay, I haven’t even read past the first page yet, but I have to comment and say that I’m a little freaked out. After work this morning I decided to have a Tarantino marathon, and right before I checked the main page I’d just finished watching Pulp Fiction. Needless to say, I’m feeling a little spooked as well as amused by the word “motherfucker” in this. Okay, I’m gonna go read the rest and leave more feedback later. Ta.

    6. Okay, I read it and have returned to comment again. You’re a fucking heartbreaker, you know that?? I’m seriously crying over here. Poor Dana, poor Alice, and even poor Jules, but she’s a bad mother fucker so she’ll get over it. Well, if there’s anything to get over, which there had better be because Alice and Dana need to be together.

    7. First things first it happened at 4am…that was magical, next I am so glad that Dana actually told Alice how she feels but for some reason I don’t think Jules is just going to sit back and let it Dana and Alice happen. This chapter would have to have an 11/10 if I could do that. Fantastic PPS.

    8. Wow! As much as my heart breaks for Dana, I understand Alice’s need to protect herself. Jules is a saint and all, but I wonder how she will react when Alice finally finds her. She gets it. Not only does Dana belong to Alice, (I loved that line), but Alice belongs to Dana too!Go Tennessee!

    11. I think we know the real reason Alice and Jules haven’t slept together yet *nudge nudge* , so when he and Alice eventually have the talk about ‘Dana’ will he admit his secret? hehe ok I love this, I truly do, I want it to never end. :) xx

    12. damn! poor dana :S she finally opens to alice but guess it was too late :( i just want jules to disappear…:P well not really but frak! i just want danish together :( can’t wait for your next chapter :D

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