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    If I Fall: Chapter 18

    Story written on April 13, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Danish stuff; Shane to the rescue, Alice re-commits herself–but to who?

     

    But somehow, the feeling she had in the pit of her stomach, apprehension mixed with an indescribable fear of what was to come, told her that things probably weren’t so black and white from Alice’s point of view. She remembered kissing her, and actually getting kissed back (something that Dana wasn’t sure she could expect) and then Alice running out as fast as she could. But what was said in the interim to make her leave like that? What had Dana said that made Alice want to run as far away as she could? Did she confess that she was still in love with her, and that as much as she tried, she could never stop? Did she ask her for another chance? Was she so drunk that she admitted what a mistake it was letting her go? Did she beg to be taken back? Dana wasn’t sure just how much of the truth was out there, but at this point in time there was definitely no going back.

     

    And maybe that was just what she needed anyway. Maybe getting piss-ass drunk and spilling her entire heart and soul out to Alice was just what the writer had to hear. God knows it would have taken Dana an entire lifetime to do it sober, so maybe this was the best and only way to get the ball rolling. But just how big of a ball was now rolling? She knew she’d have to talk to Alice and resolve all these questions in her head eventually. Although, no matter how serendipitous an event last night may prove itself to be, right now was an entirely different story. She had to first get a hold of herself, maybe talk to Shane and see what she thought, and figure things out from there. Maybe she had said enough last night and now the ball was in Alice’s court. And maybe all Dana would have to do was wait. Oh, if only things were that easy.

     

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    Forty-Five Minutes Later

    "So?" Shane just sat in her chair at the kitchen table, scratching the back of her head and wearing an intolerably unreadable expression. "Shane?" Dana inquired once more.

     

    "Dane, I’m not sure what you want me to say," the hairdresser finally admitted. After listening to Dana go on for nearly a half hour about the entire saga of last night, she really wasn’t sure how to respond. It seemed that the pair had managed to make an already complex situation even more convoluted, and on top of that, Dana wasn’t even sure what was actually said. All this made it nearly impossible to assess.

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    1. Damn right she can…although the Julish reconciliation vexes me, mostly because I too am waiting for the other shoe to drop and Dana to get flat-out rejected and heartbroken. It’s wrong of me to want them to reconcile and be happy when they haven’t worked through their stuff, but dammit they freaking need to. Oh, and don’t feel obligated to post. I’m assuming you’ll be busy with law-school-esque things, and those take precedence over any type of Danish fiction. Think of your career! Wow, I’m really rambling. This is what not sleeping for three days will do to your brain.

    3. god i want alice to be happy she deserves it so much…and dana is it but i like jules too shes a great character..buuuuuut dana its always been dana and always will thats what i reckon anyway lol i love this story so much you write so well good job:)

    4. Someone has been busy writing! (yay for us readers – though I get the impression it is going to get worse for danish before it gets better…

    5. screw your career. POST soon dammit! man… i have a headache. I hear Alice and Shane talking and think- Dana really did foul this up– and i’m still not sure why- and what’s changed, really? why SHOULD Alice believe her– other than she really wants to and loves her. i’m mad at dana. but i also adore her and don’t want her heartbroken plus i know she is who Alice needs and wants…. see-this is why you need to post. i am looking forward to seeing how Dana handles seeing Alice with Jules that evening- i’ll wring her neck if she runs. : )

    6. i love this story. it’d be too much to hope that shane taped dana’s confession right? that’d be an asshole move, but alice needs to hear everything dana said. argh.

    7. The only thing I don’t like about each chapter of your story is that eventually each one ends. I just want them to go on and on! I look forward to the next update as time permits.

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