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    If I Fall: Chapter 18

    Story written on April 13, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Danish stuff; Shane to the rescue, Alice re-commits herself–but to who?

    "I need you to tell me what I should do!"

     

    "You know I can’t do that."

     

    "Why the hell not," the athlete half-pleaded, half-whined.

     

    "Because this is between you and Alice," she began as she got up to refill her coffee mug. "Besides, you didn’t seem to need my advice last night when you were busy shoving your tongue down her throat." The stylist turned around slyly and winked at her friend.

     

    "Thanks, Shane…"

     

    "Come on, Dane, you know I’m just trying to lighten the mood a bit. I mean, so what? You kissed Alice. From what you say, she seemed to kiss you back, right? So what’s the problem?"

     

    "The problem…is that she was yelling at me for sending her mixed messages before all this, and then I go and kiss her!"

     

    "Well, I’d say that kissing her probably solved that problem, huh?" she quipped.

     

    Dana rolled her eyes at the lack of severity Shane was treating her predicament with. "Shane, you don’t get it. This isn’t just some innocent, drunken kiss for me. This is Alice."

     

    "Yeah I know. You two have a past, it’s more complicated."

     

    "No…no, that’s just it. This isn’t about the past."

     

    "It’s not?" She knew damn well that it was much more than that for her two best friends, and she was glad at least one of them was starting to see it too. She could tell that there was still so much left unresolved, still so much love there, and no amount of denial could ever change that. But as one of Dana’s best friends Shane learned a long time ago that playing dumb, especially in situations that Dana needed to figure out on her own, was much more effective than any amount of advice she could give. And this situation with Alice was no different. In fact, it was probably more important than any other menial dilemma Dana had ever placed at Shane’s feet, asking her to resolve.

     

    "No, it’s not. This isn’t about the past, Shane. It’s about the future. Our future."

     

    "Your future with Alice?"

     

    "Yes." Dana sighed, running her hand through her hair and unconsciously untangling the locks that fell to her shoulders. She wasn’t sure how to explain it any better to Shane. Hell, she wasn’t sure how to explain it any better to herself. She quickly stood up and looked out the window over the sink, hoping that somehow the answer would simply be written on the lawn of Shane and Jenny’s backyard. "I…I made a mistake."

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    1. Damn right she can…although the Julish reconciliation vexes me, mostly because I too am waiting for the other shoe to drop and Dana to get flat-out rejected and heartbroken. It’s wrong of me to want them to reconcile and be happy when they haven’t worked through their stuff, but dammit they freaking need to. Oh, and don’t feel obligated to post. I’m assuming you’ll be busy with law-school-esque things, and those take precedence over any type of Danish fiction. Think of your career! Wow, I’m really rambling. This is what not sleeping for three days will do to your brain.

    3. god i want alice to be happy she deserves it so much…and dana is it but i like jules too shes a great character..buuuuuut dana its always been dana and always will thats what i reckon anyway lol i love this story so much you write so well good job:)

    4. Someone has been busy writing! (yay for us readers – though I get the impression it is going to get worse for danish before it gets better…

    5. screw your career. POST soon dammit! man… i have a headache. I hear Alice and Shane talking and think- Dana really did foul this up– and i’m still not sure why- and what’s changed, really? why SHOULD Alice believe her– other than she really wants to and loves her. i’m mad at dana. but i also adore her and don’t want her heartbroken plus i know she is who Alice needs and wants…. see-this is why you need to post. i am looking forward to seeing how Dana handles seeing Alice with Jules that evening- i’ll wring her neck if she runs. : )

    6. i love this story. it’d be too much to hope that shane taped dana’s confession right? that’d be an asshole move, but alice needs to hear everything dana said. argh.

    7. The only thing I don’t like about each chapter of your story is that eventually each one ends. I just want them to go on and on! I look forward to the next update as time permits.

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