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    If I Fall: Chapter 19

    Story written on May 19, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=65730
    Author Notes:

    Finally an update to this danish story (there’s been a lack of them recently, no?). I’m no good at summaries, but it’s chock full of danish so read on.

     

    "I guess I just know her and I know why she does the things she does. She can’t handle being alone Shane. Since the whole Subaru ad and her coming out and all, she hasn’t been alone for more than 5 seconds. She goes from Lara to Tonya, right to me without so much as a moment to breathe, and then right back to Lara again. And now that Lara’s out of the picture, she’s convinced she wants me back to ease her loneliness. That is, until something better comes along and then it’s ‘Bye, Bye Alice!’"

     

    "I don’t know, Al. I just don’t see Dana using you like that."

     

    "Well I don’t even think she realizes she’s doing it. It’s not like she intends to use me, I just think she can’t hash out her feelings so she just takes the easy way out. It’s kind of like she’s just worried about a quick fix for right now, and the big neon ‘SUCKER’ sign on my forehead must be blinking pretty rapidly."

     

    "Okay fine, even if that’s true…why wouldn’t she just go hook up with some random chick? I mean, she’s a pretty famous tennis player, and an even more famous lesbian. It’s not like she doesn’t have options. If she really didn’t love you, why would she want to get back into something and just complicate her life more?"

     

    "’Cause I’m easy. Well, not really, but you know what I mean. Getting back with me is an easy fit for her. She knows I’ll be there for her. She knows I’ll take care of her and make sure she’s not alone. And most importantly, she knows I won’t leave her."

     

    "I don’t know, Alice. She seemed pretty genuine. Dana’s a lot like me, you know? She doesn’t really wear her heart on her sleeve and she scares easily, I get that. But this morning…when she was talking about how she feels about you, it was almost impossible for me to doubt her."

     

    "Coincidence that she realizes this the day after Lara leaves her," Alice observed.

     

    "Well, I don’t know exactly what went down with that, but from what she says, Lara left because she knew she’d never be able to compete with the way Dana felt about you."

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    1. Am I first? Awesome. This is absofuckinglutely awesome, although I think you’re crazy for posting it the day before you graduate. Huge congrats on that, and as to writing Danish fic professionally, I’d kill for a career like that. Then again, you’re much more eloquent than I am, so maybe I should just deal with the fact that I have a boring job. Oh well. I love, love, love this so freaking much, and as much as I want them back together I think it’s good for Alice to try and stop that, at least initially. Still, you can’t stay away from your other half too long, even if your rebound girl is a bad mother fucker. Have fun getting that JD thingie, and post when you can.

    2. Wow – a fantastic update, great to have more Danish writers back on line – but understand your absence and would like to offer my congratulatons on uyour graduation. Look forward to the next installment soon providing you don’t celebrate too hard.

    4. holy that was great ooh man drama drama drama i feel sorry for dana though lol alice will come around rite.. but i think its good she isnt just giving in, dana needs this lol man i just love this story great work and i’ll forgive u for making me wait haha :) p.s good on ya for graduating!!

    5. First, congratulations on your graduation. I’ve been down that same road myself and appreciate how much effort your achievement represents. Second, another great chapter–the dialogue sounds very real, and it’s heartbreaking watching Alice struggle with letting herself believe that Dana still loves her. As much as I’m rooting for Dana and Danish, I’m also pulling for the rebuilding of Alice’s self-esteem. I’m looking forward to seeing how and if Danish can work their way back to each other. Great story!

    7. I don’t know exactly how that was just posted… Anyway, it is so nice that you and the others have blessed us with updates.I feel Dana’s pain, but I’m definitely siding with Alice right now. Dana has some more work to do. Jules seems ready to make it more difficult for her.Congrats on your graduation!!!

    8. Yay another update…the wait was definitely worth it! Your posts always brighten up my day. This is my favorite story by far. Not only is the storyline great but you stay true to the characters and their feelings so well. Please post again soon :)

    9. Congrats! Very Awesome Accomplishment!This story is great, I love the angst…Dana has a lot mor work to do and so does Alice for herself…I feel bad for Jules…but A&D have a powerful connection, I beleive you said magnetic a couple chaps back! Keep It Coming!

    10. Wow wow wow wow…. i have finally got caught up with this story and it didnt disapoint at all. One of the best danish fics i have ever read – actually the best – the feelings you stir in me when reading this is unbeliveable. You really have to post more asap…. CONGRATS on your graduation x

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