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    If I Fall: Chapter 19

    Story written on May 19, 2007 by swismiss24.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=65730
    Author Notes:

    Finally an update to this danish story (there’s been a lack of them recently, no?). I’m no good at summaries, but it’s chock full of danish so read on.

     

    Alice directed her attention to the window as she pondered Shane’s previous statement. She knew her friend wouldn’t just say anything she didn’t fully believe in. And despite all of Alice’s reservations, maybe Shane did have a point. Lara wouldn’t have just dumped Dana without good reason after all she did to get back together with the athlete in the first place. And it wasn’t as if Alice thought Dana was lying last night when she said the relationship ended because of the feelings Dana still had for her. The rational part of Alice’s brain just didn’t want to believe it and get sucked back into that feeling of powerlessness she had when she succumbed to her feelings for Dana. It was just too overwhelming for the writer to bear, especially if there still existed the chance of it all being taken away without warning just like before.

     

    She was shaken from her thoughts by the sound of the door opening. Turning her attention to the source of the noise, who did she see walking into the café, but Lara. Her head was down and from what Alice could see, she looked like she hadn’t slept in days. She continued to observe the chef until she disappeared through the kitchen doors when an idea finally struck her.

     

    "Al…hello? What are you looking at?" Shane grumbled as she noticed Alice’s attention was being directed elsewhere.

     

    "Listen Shane, I appreciate hearing you’re take on everything, really I do. You’re a good friend, and it was a good talk. But I just remembered there’s something I have to go do right now."

     

    "Oh. Alright, I’ll see you tonight at the concert I guess.

     

    "Good. And bring your wallet."

     

    "Is that all I am to you, Alice? A source of income?" Shane teased as she threw some money down on the table and walked towards the door.

     

    "Oh shut it, it’s for a good cause."

     

    "Yeah, yeah. I’ll see you later." She put her sunglasses back on and left, leaving Alice standing by the front counter with a terribly anxious look on her face.

     

    Kit was just finishing ringing up a customer behind the counter when Alice tentatively approached her.

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    1. Am I first? Awesome. This is absofuckinglutely awesome, although I think you’re crazy for posting it the day before you graduate. Huge congrats on that, and as to writing Danish fic professionally, I’d kill for a career like that. Then again, you’re much more eloquent than I am, so maybe I should just deal with the fact that I have a boring job. Oh well. I love, love, love this so freaking much, and as much as I want them back together I think it’s good for Alice to try and stop that, at least initially. Still, you can’t stay away from your other half too long, even if your rebound girl is a bad mother fucker. Have fun getting that JD thingie, and post when you can.

    2. Wow – a fantastic update, great to have more Danish writers back on line – but understand your absence and would like to offer my congratulatons on uyour graduation. Look forward to the next installment soon providing you don’t celebrate too hard.

    4. holy that was great ooh man drama drama drama i feel sorry for dana though lol alice will come around rite.. but i think its good she isnt just giving in, dana needs this lol man i just love this story great work and i’ll forgive u for making me wait haha :) p.s good on ya for graduating!!

    5. First, congratulations on your graduation. I’ve been down that same road myself and appreciate how much effort your achievement represents. Second, another great chapter–the dialogue sounds very real, and it’s heartbreaking watching Alice struggle with letting herself believe that Dana still loves her. As much as I’m rooting for Dana and Danish, I’m also pulling for the rebuilding of Alice’s self-esteem. I’m looking forward to seeing how and if Danish can work their way back to each other. Great story!

    7. I don’t know exactly how that was just posted… Anyway, it is so nice that you and the others have blessed us with updates.I feel Dana’s pain, but I’m definitely siding with Alice right now. Dana has some more work to do. Jules seems ready to make it more difficult for her.Congrats on your graduation!!!

    8. Yay another update…the wait was definitely worth it! Your posts always brighten up my day. This is my favorite story by far. Not only is the storyline great but you stay true to the characters and their feelings so well. Please post again soon :)

    9. Congrats! Very Awesome Accomplishment!This story is great, I love the angst…Dana has a lot mor work to do and so does Alice for herself…I feel bad for Jules…but A&D have a powerful connection, I beleive you said magnetic a couple chaps back! Keep It Coming!

    10. Wow wow wow wow…. i have finally got caught up with this story and it didnt disapoint at all. One of the best danish fics i have ever read – actually the best – the feelings you stir in me when reading this is unbeliveable. You really have to post more asap…. CONGRATS on your graduation x

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