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If I Fall: Chapter 20
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She let out the breath she was unconsciously holding as she snaked her way through the crowd to get to the side of the stage where she promised Jules she’d be. And once Jules was squarely in her view, she smiled at the charisma and straight-up sexiness that her girlfriend exuded with the mic in her hand. Anyone on the planet would be more than lucky to be able to call the singer her own. To go to bed with her at night and wake up next to her in the morning, to hear her own name on the blonde’s lips when she wanted to dedicate a song to her "someone special". Alice knew she should be grateful for Jules and damn near ecstatic that she had found someone so wonderful to call her own. Except, right now, at that moment, all she could focus on was Dana, and the insatiable desire building up inside of her when she thought about how badly she wanted to rush back into that bathroom and kiss the athlete like she’d never been kissed before.
She felt her face flush as she played the scene out in her head, wondering what Dana would have done had Alice stayed right where she was and given in to the indescribable electricity coursing between them. She briefly turned back to the bathroom door, secretly hoping that Dana would have followed her out or not let her go. And yet she knew she left because it was what she had to do. It was, in fact, the right, fair thing to do, for everyone involved. But somehow, for Alice, doing the right thing never felt so wrong.
On the other side of the room, the rest of the friends watched the band play from their comfortable seats at a private table Kit had reserved for them before the rush hit.
"Hey guys, I got the next round. Everyone up for another?" Carmen shouted to her friends over the booming cacophony of music originating from the stage. They were all seated around the table, except for Shane, who was standing up a few inches away from them, contemplating whether or not she should start looking for Alice and Dana, who were incidentally both missing from the group.
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As promised, I have returned, so huzzah or some other such thing. To start with, I must have skipped over your disclaimer this morning…I read it and didn’t stop laughing for a good five minutes. Thinking about it now is making me giggle again. I’m glad I don’t have any roommates, or I’d be off to the loony bin for sure. As for the story…well, I hope you’re being serious about the angst letting up soon. Sure, I can be a drama whore in my story, but it’s usually only for a chapter or two. Alice needs to get over herself. I mean, yeah, protecting yourself is all well and good, but you only get so far in life by observing it going on around you. And Dana needs to prove herself with more than just words. (Sidenote…when they finally do reconcile, can it be on a tennis court? The tennis dresses make me drool). And I’ll be glad to take Jules off Al’s hands when she goes back to the love of her life. Oh, and I’m glad somebody agrees with me on the Mariah thing. The very idea makes me cringe, but I have a friend who swears up and down that she’s actually pretty good. Whatev. Okay, now that I’ve babbled your life away, I’ll leave this with a plea for you to post again soon. I still heart this story even though it makes me want to tear out my hair.
forget what muted said about the angst! we LOVE the angst… how can we have steamy, tension filled bathroom moments without angst? don’t hurry it- they’ve only just now started admitting the problem- that ought to be good for at least a few more chapters! : ) loved the scene with Bette too–“The unfamiliar feeling of optimism was a welcome change, and it was as if Bette’s words lifted up a bit of the burden she’d be carrying around lately.” very nice Swis. Post soon.
oh how i’ve waited for you, checking each day to see if you’ve posted and today my lord wat did i see your name…soo worth the wait wat a sad ending tho i love this story great work!!!!!
Nice Update, filled without alot of Danish angst, but we know what happens after Danish angst….Danish Lovin’
If I didn’t know how much you loved danish too, I’d be worried. :-) I must ask that you make us suffer at least a little while longer, but please throw us a bone once in a while. :-)
i love the angst. keep it coming. but i do see the light at the end of the tunnel.
Please update this story there are not enough dana and alice storys out there…… the story is great
am i first?? i’m never first for anything! anyway, i have to say this was a great chapter! i feel so bad for dana but she put herself in this position. can’t wait to see what happens next. post soon!
Okay, I need to rush to my dead end job so I just skimmed this over, but it looks more than good. I’ll read it when I get home tonight and leave a much better, or at least more well-thought-out, comment then. Yay, you posted right after me! We rule.
Yippee! Fresh Danish! Great chapter swismiss. I am looking forward to how the story continues to unfold…
So glad to see you updating this story. Feeling sorry for Dana but, yeah, she put herself in this position. Your writing is wonderfully easy to read and the whole story seems to flow so well – lovin’ it!
haha, way to call me out, cape! Nah, the angst is good. I do heart the tension, as long as it leads to good things. You’ve already promised it will, so carry on. :P
Oh I fvuking love this story :) it has been a long time since you posted but I’m sure we all remember the story as I do. Keep posting and post soon thx chick xx
wow. glad you’re back posting again :)
where u at swissmiss i miss you and this story so so much. u kno ur my favourite please come back soon :)