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If I Fall: Chapter 21a
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"Wait," the blonde abruptly stopped her, a look of concern washing over her face. "Isn’t it rude, I mean, to leave the party like this?"
"Pssh, please, Helena won’t even notice we’re gone." And she once again started pulling Jules along with her until, once again, she was halted by the nervous blonde.
"But didn’t she mention that the upstairs bathroom was off limits because of renovations or something?"
Alice knew she had a point, but after pondering for a moment she realized it didn’t matter. "Well, we won’t exactly be using the bathroom will we? Maybe just the floor…ooh, or the counter top…" Again she began to lead her up the stairs.
"Alice! We can’t exactly go up there to say we need the bathroom if it doesn’t work. Helena will definitely know what we’re doing, isn’t that wrong?"
At this the writer couldn’t help but let out a hearty chuckle. "Oh honey, clearly you don’t know what my friends are capable of!"
Jules frowned. "Still, they aren’t my friends, and I’d feel better if maybe you went on ahead and I met you up there, okay?"
Sighing defeatedly, Alice realized going on ahead and waiting a few minutes for Jules to join her was the only way her plan would be set in motion. "Fine. But if you’re not there in five minutes…well, I’m just gonna wait longer." And with that, she scurried up the stairs and entered the nearest, most disheveled bathroom she’d ever laid eyes on. It looked as if a small bomb had hit it, leaving the fixtures in complete disarray. Alice quickly cleared a spot for herself on the countertop next to the sink, propping herself onto it and doing her best job at hiking her skirt up seductively.
Back downstairs, Jules glanced around nervously, realizing all those around her seemed to be engaged intently in their own respective conversations, hardly taking notice of her presence at all. But as soon as she placed her hand on the staircase railing to begin her ascent, she was halted by the ringing of her cell phone.
"Hello?" she asked rather impatiently. "Oh, hi Tom." It was her assistant director from the primary clinic she was based out of, calling to inform her of a pending crisis that needed her immediate assistance. "No Tom, I’m actually—. Wait, she what? No, no, no, don’t do anything, okay? I’m on my way."
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Nice Cliffhanger, don’t wait too long to update! Bathrooms are Danish’s special place…Get it on Get it on
Okay you’ve gotta be kidding me with this “should I continue” crap. Seriously, if you don;t have them work it out and consummate the hell out of each other I’m gonna hunt you down. Not really but it sounded good in my head. You quit I quit, so there. Really though, I love this and I love the whole tension thing. You’re awesome so you better damn well continue!
Swissmiss24, of course I remember your story. As a matter of fact, I have been waiting for this update. A month ago, I mentioned you on ourchart.com/forums/fanfiction/”Danish Writers, Where Art Thou.” The story line is attractive with D pursuing A. You wrote a very determined D. For example, in this chapter, you wrote “And when Alice did get tired, Dana would be there, ready to try again.” And yes, the cat and mouse game, that is why Danish is intriguing. Back to this chapter having Harrison as D’s sounding board was fun. It reminded me of the 3 musketeers’ visiting B & T to solve the “soup chef” problem. I could picture D’s same expression in this conversation with Harrison. Oh, and about Alice exercising, only if the sun would rise from the west. A’s heart to heart talk with Harriet was great. At least it was a start for A to admit herself out loud her feelings for D. But stalking again, I am not sure I can handle a second round. I love a hot & dorky Dana. Cinderella & Prince Charming? Nice touch. OMG, what a fantastic cliffhanger ending. I don’t know how you can even consider not continuing this story. About a month ago, I started commenting on Danish stories. With this post, you gave me a chance to tell you how much joy I got reading your previous posts. MT put it the best and please listen to her. MT also writes so beautifully and we as readers could not afford to lose two major Danish writers who happen to be “La crème de la crème”. So, pps, I waited more than 2 months for this post and if I have to wait again, it will be fine with me. I do understand quality writing takes time. I would love to read how they work things out. Thank you very much.
Oh my god!! You can NOT leave it there!! Please continue with this story.
Just popped out to join in the begging comments. Pleeeease… don’t keep us in suspense any longer… And pleeeease, don’t even think of quitting it; it’s too good!! Dana being the drooling one… owww that’s priceless! I wish they had shown us some of this in the show. Fast forward to Julesless si vous plait; she doesn’t hold a candle to Dana…!! Plus, I can see a dark side on her. I don’t buy that social worker stuff… I think she has something up her sleeve… PleeeeasePS, I love it!
argh – i can’t believe you left it there. i hope you keep your promise and post soon. this update was really good. the interaction with harrison and dana was really cute. and you really do a great job of transitioning between scenes. i know you had to set up the run in, but i can’t believe jules just left alice in the bathroom – she couldn’t have ran upstairs and told her she was leaving. excellent story, post soon.
ps. please do not quit this story its to good, im gunna put it out there swissmiss.. i think its the best!! one lol theres heaps of great stories and how i love them all but yours oh man im in love with it ahaha i sound so stupid right now but thats the truth and im sure there are many that agree thats all :)
wow that was quick you totally answered my prayers lol neways wow eleven i was like out of breath when i realised you had posted then i saw how much and i got so excited lol geezus do you know how much i’ve missed this story but you fully made it up with this one and i can only imagine wats gunna happen in that bathroom or mybe i have dirty mind neways them two alone is always great :) very happy to see your back and on a regualr basis right loved it all of it :) great work!!!!
i love this story so much its great and i really hope you post again very soon (tonight maybe?lol) im so glad you decided to keep going with the story and you better not just leave it and stop!i love it so keep writing and posting lots!
Great update, swismiss! 21a implies a 21b coming along soon, right? Please?
I’m not much of a poster, Im usually dedicated to Muted’s danish only on here but about 2 months ago I decided to check around when I really needed a danish fix. I remember reading the last chapter posted and being like “oh shit this was like over a month ago, theres no way shes gonna post again!” yet today I decided to check anywaise and saw that you did, you have no idea how excited I was for some fresh danish and a solution to the last chapter. But I gotta say, your cruel for leaving this on such a cliff hanger. Pleeeeease post again and continue to do so. I depend on fanfic to keep my danish addiction satisfied, and your one of the best by far. I love this story! But especially I love Dana just because shes the hottest, funniest and most adorable character on the show. I love me some good danish in the mornings, so please post the rest in the next week. Im jonesing.
please don’t keep us hanging in here for long. hihihi I’ve been reading your story and I like it very much, just thought I’d leave a comment to let you know, thanks:)