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If I Fall: Chapter 21b
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Once the sounds of their collective laughter subsided, Dana’s face suddenly turned somber and she asked, "Would it really kill you to give us another chance?"
The writer directed her gaze to meet Dana’s watchful eyes and swallowed hard before whispering, "It might."
They shared a tense look for a few moments, filled mostly with hope on Dana’s part and melancholy on Alice’s. And yet the one undeniable feeling the two both shared within that same look was undoubtedly one of intense longing. It quickly became too much for the writer to handle and she turned away shyly, focusing her attentions on the dilapidated towel rack beside her. "So what are we supposed to do in here? Just wait for someone to realize we’re gone and come find us?"
"I guess," Dana suggested, shaken quickly out of her reverie. "I don’t know about you, but I actually do have to pee. Can you turn around please?"
The writer rolled her eyes at Dana’s awkward timing and sighed before turning around to face the mirror so Dana could have her privacy. Yet after hearing the sounds of Dana lifting up the fabric of the sexy blue dress she was sporting, Alice found herself unable to resist stealing a surreptitious glance in the mirror.
And much to her embarrassment, it was answered with an "I saw that," from Dana.
"Saw what?" She replied much too quickly and Dana smiled to herself at how cute Alice could be when she was caught red-handed.
"You just stole a peek!"
"Get over yourself, would you? I’m not trying to watch you pee. That’s just gross."
"Yeah, just like waiting up here so you can have sex in a bathroom, huh?" Dana flushed the toilet and made her way over to the sink next to Alice .
"Ha! I distinctly remember someone singing a slightly different tune when it was her in this bathroom having sex with me."
She washed her hands, smiling mischievously at Alice’s remark, and looked around for a towel with which to dry them. Spotting one hanging on the wall directly behind Alice, she inched closer to the writer, who was now facing her, until their hips were nearly touching. With a deliberately slow pace, she extended one hand past Alice in order to grab the towel, while resting the other tentatively on the writer’s waist. And without removing her eyes from Alice’s line of vision, she quickly dried both hands and threw the towel onto the countertop before encircling Alice’s hips with her arms and resting them there silently.
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Encyclopedia brown? Very funny. This has to be one of the most memorable bathroom scene that I have ever read. D’s confession was genuine and touching. How can A not take her back after that. And it was longest speech I had ever seen D spoke. That was mind blowing. Well done, swissmiss24. Thank you for bringing them back together for even just a moment. I guess things must hit rock bottom before getting better. I had conflicting feelings of Helena interrupting. But what she said to D should shed a light on D the pain the A had endured. I can’t wait for your next post. Thank you so very much.
Thanks for continuing. It’s going to be interesting to see what it finally takes for Al to let Dana back in. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Yay, I don’t have to kick your ass! Which I couldn’t do anyway, but still. I absolutely loved it, same as always. But I’m really getting anxious for this “happy Danish” you keep alluding to. And don’t worry, I’m planning a trip out there after L3! I’ve been antisocial too long!
Thank you, swismiss!! What delightful Danish… Please keep writing. I am not sure what happened to Fripster and I would hate to lose you or Muted… ;-D “Encyclopedia Brown” — Soooooo Dana! I love how Dana articulated herself. “And I don’t want you to be my teacher Alice, I want you to be my partner” — Swoon. I think Jules is wonderful, but, my heart belongs to Danish. I’m kinda glad Helena barged in. I think Alice would have felt bad if anything more had happened. She needs to come to the realization that Dana is there for her and is the right choice without too much guilt — although I know she will feel bad for hurting Jules. Thank you again for the great update!!
i will probably read this every day until you post again. so please post soon. ny, huh? i am a part time new yorker now – i have to go there part of the week for an indefinite period. i am excited. i love new york. well that was an excellent update – i love that we are starting to see the light at the end of the tunnel. they were so cute, i love how dana laid it all out on the line.
WOW!!! How could Alice not take her back after that heartfelt confession? Jules is great and all but she doesn’t have a snowball’s chance in hell. It’s just a matter of time before Alice completely gives in and goes back to Dana. Great update, please post soon.
Thank you so much for the update! I loved it! You know, yesterday I started to reread your story, chapter and verse, so that I could enjoy more your next one, if possible!! I shouldn’t do it though. I’m supossed to work hard on my dissertation; both you and MutedTempest are jeopardizing the project! ;p Just kiddin’. You made my day! Now, I gotta go back to it… (ANGST!).THANKS again!
Oh.my.god!!! wow that was soooooooo good i enjoyed that thoroughly every inch, poor dana poor alice..im gunna go read it again:)
wow. so good, so so good. you are my danish angel. i can’t wait to see where this goes now. pleeease post soon!
helena has some bad timeing but there is still hope there for alice and dana please post soon I love it
YES! there you are! “Hi, kettle, this is Dana, you’re black.” LMAO I almost forgot to check in here for some Danish, glad I did. Please please post soon? If this was a real scene in the show, I’m absolutely possitive that this would be my favorite. Dang Helena, hehehe thanks for the updatw swismiss.:D
Glad you posted again! Dana needs to go get her girl! I can understand Alice’s reservations, but come on they belong together!!! Loved the bathroom scene!!! Keep up the good work!