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    If I Fall: Chapter 6

    Story written on December 23, 2006 by swismiss24.
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    Author Notes:

    Dana likes “lady parts”, Alice can’t help her Tourettes, Alice and Dana find common ground and try to make a fresh start. (I hope it’s much more interesting than this lame summary).

    Dana grabbed a PowerAde from the fridge and her iPod on the counter and made her way towards the front door. But as soon as she opened it to step outside, she jumped back immediately at the sight of a nervous Alice standing cautiously in front of her.

    “Alice!” exclaimed a surprised Dana.

    “Hi,” the writer replied in a hushed whisper, internally scolding herself for not being able to find her voice when she needed it most.

    “Hi.”

    “Hi,” Alice repeated, trying her best to delay the inevitable.

    “I think you said that already,” Dana teased to try to lighten the palpable tension.

    “Yeah,” Alice couldn’t help but sigh, “I think I said a lot of things today, didn’t I?”

    At that, Dana’s expression immediately changed. “Look, Al…if you’re here for Round Two, I probably deserve it, but I’m really not up for it right now.”

    “No!” Alice shouted a bit louder than she intended. She couldn’t help it. God was this what Dana really thought of her? Hell, even if she did, Alice surmised that she couldn’t really blame her for it. “I mean, no, that’s not why I came here…I, uh…”

    Realizing that this was more than just a quick hello, Dana did her best to make Alice as comfortable as she could. “Do you want to come in?”

    “Uh…” Alice followed Dana’s eyes to the living room and considered her options. She could have the talk while remaining on the opposite side of the doorway, or she could step inside and hope that being in Dana’s house again wasn’t too difficult. After a few moments of uncertainty, she chose the latter and stepped inside as Dana moved back to let her in. There was a brief hesitation as Alice wanted to resume her old spot on the loveseat, but thought better of it when she remembered this wasn’t like the old days. And then she thought about the old days and how she and Dana made love countless times on the love seat. Which immediately reminded her of how afterwards, without fail, Dana would coyly joke that she guessed “loveseat” wasn’t just a clever name for that particular piece of furniture.

    Alice smiled at the memory and waited for Dana to join her.

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    1. Cute danish comments at the beginning of the story.The “peeper” scene was one of the few times that I felt bad for Dana. It made me cringe when I saw it, and when I read it. Man, Alice was in bad shape, and she couldn’t stop herself. I love that they are finally on the road to friendship, though I expect it to be rocky. Thanks so much for the update!I have no willpower when it comes to fanfic. I either find myself running late for work in the morning because of an update, or in this case, late for a Christmas party. I think I have 9 minutes to get ready, but it was soooooooooo worth it! Happy Holidays.

    2. I don’t know why you’re not entirely happy with this, I think it’s fabulous. I love the explanation as to how Helena and Alice became friends, and of course the danish comments…I did that too, a few chapters back in my story, and laughed the whole time I was typing it out. Anyway, I’m rambling but I love the direction you’re taking this, and it’s making more and more sense as it goes on. You make it realistic and true tothe characters, which is a hell of a lot more than I can say for the original version. Thanks for posting this, have a good holiday and congrats on getting through your finals!

    3. I don’t see anything to dislike in this chapter. I enjoyed it; I thought it was realistic and the pace is right. Small moves, for the both of them, but actually a giant leap from where Al and Dana had been. We’ll have to see how they get on next time at the Planet. Good on you for getting through your finals, post soon, and have a Happy Christmas. Cheers!

    4. If only something like this had happened in the show :( you have no reason not to be 100% happy with this because it’s amazing. You have me laughing one minute, pausing for deep thought, almost in tears the next it’s just brilliant and it seems to explain a lot of things that we didnt see in the show. I too love how Helena and Alice became friend, I can so picture that happening, however don’t slate starbucks coffee, I use it every day at work :P xx

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