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If I Fall: Chapter 7
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“Well if she’s as talented with a guitar as she is at flirting…”
“What does that mean?”
“I was listening to the show yesterday, she was totally hitting on you.”
“Oh please! She was just star struck.”
”Al, you’d have to be a star for that.”
“Thanks, bitch.”
Shane smirked as Alice flipped her off, “So do you know what she looks like?”
“Who, Jules?”
“Yeah.”
“No. I’m not even sure if she’s the lead singer or just another member of the band. Come to think of it, she doesn’t know what I look like either.”
Just then the lights went down and the band filtered out from the back and onto the stage. To the confusion of both Shane and Alice, the only people on stage were men. As the music began to play, Alice immediately liked their sound, but she knew none of those guys on stage was the girl who called into her show yesterday. Shane looked over at Alice and immediately read her baffled expression.
“Maybe this isn’t them,” she shouted over the booming guitar.
“Yeah, good call. I don’t think the bass player with the goatee looks like a Julian—“
Alice abruptly ceased talking as her mouth went dry and she forgot to finish her sentence. Shane noticed the sudden change in her friend and followed her wide brown eyes to the stage, where she saw the emergence of the lead singer. Her long wavy dirty blonde hair cascaded over her shoulders and her slender physique moved in rhythm to the music. Shane raised her eyebrows taking in what turned out to be a very sexy lead singer. She turned back to Alice, who was watching the woman on stage intently.
“I guess we know which one Julianna is.”
“Huh?” Alice was shaken out of her trance and turned to her friend. “What?”
Shane laughed at how obvious Alice was. “Nothing, Al…I think you have a little drool right there on your chin.”
“Very funny, Shane…but wait, do you really think that’s her?” Alice couldn’t properly conceal the rising excitement in her voice.
“My powers of deduction tell me yes.”
“Shit, she’s gorgeous. And her voice, it’s almost…angelic.”
Shane looked at Alice in frightened disbelief and rolled her eyes when she realized her friend was serious…and smitten. "Jesus Christ," she muttered to herself as she watched Alice openly gawk at the stage.
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Woah so much happened and explained about our girl but firstly, Alice mate what are you doing going out and getting yourself emotionally involved with another woman when your in no fit state to handle yourself? Then again Jules could be could for her but maybe only as a distraction from her underlying problem…Dana. And now that Dana and Lara are rocky over Alice will they break up? And how will Alice react to Dana being single if they do? Will this cause Alice to flip out again blaming herself and how will Dana react to know that Alice is out dating again? oh my god way too many questions I need answers to like right now lol. I think I’m starting to sound like Carrie Bradshaw from SATC with these questions so I’m gonna round it up by saying awesome post, loving this story, you may not post often but damn they are brilliant when you do! xx
Gah! So much tension! So much uncertainty! I don’t know that I can take it! And dammit, you made me like Jules. I’m not supposed to like people other than Dana with Alice, so I’m quite perplexed, especially since you gave her Samuel L. Jackson’s character name in Pulp Fiction. But anyway, aside from my vexation I loved it. So much was explained, and you made it realistic and totally fitting for Alice’s character. I think I’m going to go crawl into a hole in shame now. Toodles.
WOot woot good for Alice! I wonder how Dana’s gonna take Alice dating again. Thanks for another awsome chapter, post more soon!!
I haven’t read yet, but there’s nothing more productive than posting!Okay, maybe that’s not quite true, but you should write as much as you can now – to make up for when you’ll be too busy again in a few weeks. (That didn’t sound self-serving, did it?) lol
I liked Jules too. I didn’t find her annoying at all, though when she called in, she sounded an awful lot like Dana. I’ve never wanted Lara and Dana to stay together – until now. Alice may not be ready for another relationship, but I’m all for a little distraction. I don’t think Alice’s problem is Dana. I think her problem is Alice, and her family issues growing up. I’m looking forward to seeing where you go with Jules and Alice.
i finally got caught up reading the past 5 posts and it is great. i love that you have given some background and reasoning for the things that alice and dana have done. it is definitely true to character. jules sounds super cute. i am excited for jealous dana when she sees them together. post soon.
So I have never read this fic before, but your summary sounded interesting so I gave it a shot and it’s great! I am gonna go catch up right now. lol. I also wanted to say that when you were naming bands and you mentioned Garbage and No Doubt, I was thinking…ok cool. This girl has good taste. But then…you mention Jenny fucking Lewis and Rilo Kiley…and I gotta say…you made me a fan for life. RK is my favorite band of all time and I have met Jenny and the gang several times. That was just too fucking cool when you mentioned them. So anyways, sorry for the ramble. This was great and I look forward to the next chapter. I’m off to read the old ones. lol
Loving this story and hoping you post again soon!