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If I Fall: Chapter 7
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After an hour-long set and two encores, the band finally finished up. Alice concluded that they were a mix between Garbage and No Doubt with an edge, although she compared Julianna’s voice initially to that of Jenny Lewis’ from Rilo Kiley. Either way, they had an incredible sound and she was unwilling to concede that Julianna’s voice was anything less than angelic. She totally wanted to get a copy of their demo to play on The Chart, but even more so, she just wanted to talk to Julianna and see if she would flirt with her in person too. This struck Alice as odd considering she hadn’t wanted to flirt with anyone, unless it was a means to getting laid, since her and Dana became intimate. Alice sighed and did one more shot before she would force herself to seek out Julianna and talk to her face to face. It was perfect timing anyway, Shane was outside smoking a cigarette, or on the phone with Carmen, or something mundane that Alice had no interest in.
Actually Shane had gone outside to use her phone when she noticed that she had two missed calls from Dana. Dana knew she was out with Alice, and it wasn’t like her to call and interrupt once, let alone twice, so Shane figured something must be up. But when she finally rang her back, the call went straight to Dana’s voice mail.
“Dane, it’s me. I saw you called but didn’t leave any messages. I hope everything’s alright—”. Just then Shane heard a beep and realized Dana was calling her on the other line. “Dane?”
“Hey.” Shane could immediately detect something off with Dana’s voice.
“Hey, what is it, you sound upset?”
“Oh, it’s nothing…”
“You sure?”
“Yes…no, I don’t even know anymore, Shane.” At this point Dana’s voice went from sad to distraught.
“Did something happen?”
She heard Dana sigh and sniffle a bit. “Lara and I just got into a huge fight and she left and I have no clue what to do.”
“Well, what was it about?” Shane immediately felt Dana’s apprehension and could almost hear her inner-struggle to find the right words. “It’s okay Dane, if you don’t want to talk about it—”
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Woah so much happened and explained about our girl but firstly, Alice mate what are you doing going out and getting yourself emotionally involved with another woman when your in no fit state to handle yourself? Then again Jules could be could for her but maybe only as a distraction from her underlying problem…Dana. And now that Dana and Lara are rocky over Alice will they break up? And how will Alice react to Dana being single if they do? Will this cause Alice to flip out again blaming herself and how will Dana react to know that Alice is out dating again? oh my god way too many questions I need answers to like right now lol. I think I’m starting to sound like Carrie Bradshaw from SATC with these questions so I’m gonna round it up by saying awesome post, loving this story, you may not post often but damn they are brilliant when you do! xx
Gah! So much tension! So much uncertainty! I don’t know that I can take it! And dammit, you made me like Jules. I’m not supposed to like people other than Dana with Alice, so I’m quite perplexed, especially since you gave her Samuel L. Jackson’s character name in Pulp Fiction. But anyway, aside from my vexation I loved it. So much was explained, and you made it realistic and totally fitting for Alice’s character. I think I’m going to go crawl into a hole in shame now. Toodles.
WOot woot good for Alice! I wonder how Dana’s gonna take Alice dating again. Thanks for another awsome chapter, post more soon!!
I haven’t read yet, but there’s nothing more productive than posting!Okay, maybe that’s not quite true, but you should write as much as you can now – to make up for when you’ll be too busy again in a few weeks. (That didn’t sound self-serving, did it?) lol
I liked Jules too. I didn’t find her annoying at all, though when she called in, she sounded an awful lot like Dana. I’ve never wanted Lara and Dana to stay together – until now. Alice may not be ready for another relationship, but I’m all for a little distraction. I don’t think Alice’s problem is Dana. I think her problem is Alice, and her family issues growing up. I’m looking forward to seeing where you go with Jules and Alice.
i finally got caught up reading the past 5 posts and it is great. i love that you have given some background and reasoning for the things that alice and dana have done. it is definitely true to character. jules sounds super cute. i am excited for jealous dana when she sees them together. post soon.
So I have never read this fic before, but your summary sounded interesting so I gave it a shot and it’s great! I am gonna go catch up right now. lol. I also wanted to say that when you were naming bands and you mentioned Garbage and No Doubt, I was thinking…ok cool. This girl has good taste. But then…you mention Jenny fucking Lewis and Rilo Kiley…and I gotta say…you made me a fan for life. RK is my favorite band of all time and I have met Jenny and the gang several times. That was just too fucking cool when you mentioned them. So anyways, sorry for the ramble. This was great and I look forward to the next chapter. I’m off to read the old ones. lol
Loving this story and hoping you post again soon!